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[文书-求改] 第一版CV,求拍

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LiamZhu 发表于 2014-9-3 06:49:29 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式


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lapore 发表于 2014-9-3 07:44:40 | 显示全部楼层
- Just remove the honor/certificates... I do not think they will care. Maybe a list for courses you learned should be better(like AI,DB,ML,Algo)...

- Something like "proficient in C++,python familiar with MATLAB, SQL"  should be better?

. Waral 鍗氬鏈夋洿澶氭枃绔,- Why the headers of project names are same as institute names? I think it should be smaller for project names.

If you apply for university, publication should be much above? Put GPA if possible..

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Shirley_Qu 发表于 2014-9-11 02:34:21 | 显示全部楼层
For EXPERIENCE part, you are not using the bullet points and fonts correctly. you don't have to put the project name as a independent title, especially you have only one point under each project.

Also, try to use verbs instead of pronounce such as "this, that" in your bullet point, it is not professional. 鏉ユ簮涓浜.涓夊垎鍦拌鍧.

your content in experience does not provide a clear message of what did YOU do in the project, just a summary of the whole thing. this is not relevant in a CV. Please try and make your contribution clear to the reader of the CV. According to your current CV, it is pretty mediocre regarding the experience part given that you have not specify your contribution and reason why a program/company should acquire you as their asset.
. more info on

Example listed below.鐣欏璁哄潧-涓浜-涓夊垎鍦
Cornell University         Date
Undergraduate research intern ( these two lines are fine)
- Achieved a small motion blablablablabla by clsutering using blablablabla. (still there is no point in rephrasing each bullet point if your personal achievement does not stand out, please revise on that.)

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zl9394 发表于 2014-9-30 21:18:00 | 显示全部楼层
. visit for more.GPA和ranking呢?
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