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RT~~~~~我一直都说computer vision会不会不太好啊,万一教授觉得我只对computer ision感兴趣不要我怎么办,是不是最后加上:除了对computer vision 之外,对于computer engineering 中涉及的其他方向也有兴趣balabala..........的会好一些呢?800左右的字数应该不算多吧,像再精炼一点,但是又觉得没什么好删的了。。。sigh~~~

. 鍥磋鎴戜滑@1point 3 acres
Personal Statement

As a fourth-year student with great interest in Computer Engineering, I decide to purse my mater degree in this filed. As for now, I want nothing more than an opportunity to be enrolled in Computer Engineering program at University of Alberta and I am assured I have what it takes to succeed.
. 1point 3acres 璁哄潧
In my undergraduate studies, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of computer hardware and  software. The highly dedicated teaching staff of my school taught me various courses involved in the field of Computer Engineering. These courses gave me an initial impression on Computer Engineering and prompted me to pay close attention to it.

I take a keen interest in Computer Vision, and I never stop seeking opportunities to participate in related projects to expand my knowledge in this field. My experience in two projects is the essential factor to guide me to choose Computer Engineering as my major during my postgraduate study. In 2013, I participated in the “Intelligent Parking Lot Video Monitoring System” project and it was my first time to touch Computer Vision. In this project we use OpenCV to develop a video monitoring system, by which, cameras can realize the parking space detection and show this information on the screens. And my responsibility is to migrate the system into the embedded system. Lack of sufficient knowledge about Ubuntu, I felt difficult at the beginning, but after I read extensive technical manuals and documentation, my work finally went smoothly.

My interest in Computer Vision has been strengthened since I joined the Self-driving Car Research Team of Wuhan University in July, 2014. As the leader of computer vision group , I am responsible for using OpenCV and Visual Studio to develop the traffic sign detection and recognition system. During the research, I read dozens of related papers and studied the OpenCV library functions by myself. I also take the responsibility to compare influences of different samples and algorithms on traffic sign detection rate. I proposed that the combination of machine learning, especially deep learning based on big data, and traditional pre-processing methods can achieve higher detection rate. This new method was proved to be effective after several experiments. Due to my sense of achievement in these two projects, my decision to choose Computer Engineering as my major for my further study becomes more and more firm. 1point3acres.com/bbs

. 鍥磋鎴戜滑@1point 3 acresIn addition to my outstanding academic performance, I also lead a colorful life. Thanks to great convenience of MOOC, I can attend various online courses on Computer Engineering in my spare time. In order to understand more easily, I make great effort to improve my English listening skills and consult a lot of reference books to expand my knowledge. This practice, I believe, can help me to adapt to the English learning environment later. Besides, I take part in quite a few extracurricular activities. As the core player of my school basketball team, I helped our team to achieve the best result in the history. I was also in charge of the Organization Department in the Student Union. I organized several events in my school and these events not only widen my vision and activate my inspiration, but also improve my leadership.

As one of the best universities in Canada, University of Alberta is ideal for my graduate study. I feel confident that the staff and facilities in your university will provide me with an environment that encourage creativity and motivation. I am well aware of the demands of studying in the more competitive environment. I am certain that I am mentally and physically competent to succeed at your school. I am basically a hard working and a sincere person. My enthusiasm and urge to excel will help me to make the best use of every learning opportunity.
. from: 1point3acres.com/bbs
In conclusion, I would like to say that the knowledge gained from my major has provided me with a solid foundation. This will certainly help me in my desire to specialize in my chosen field. My country has a booming software industry and several Internet companies, especially Alibaba and Baidu has become world-class giant companies. I aim to study abroad and return with the skill and competence to find my mark and be a vital part of this booming, futuristic industry. I assure you of my sincerity, dedication and hard work. Thank you for your patience in reading my personal statement. I really look forward to your favorable consideration of my application.

. 涓浜-涓夊垎-鍦帮紝鐙鍙戝竷

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susky1990 发表于 2014-9-24 09:02:54 | 显示全部楼层
诶?这个版区不是写文书修改的吧 呵呵
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 楼主| 358203708 发表于 2014-9-24 12:42:00 | 显示全部楼层
susky1990 发表于 2014-9-24 09:02
诶?这个版区不是写文书修改的吧 呵呵

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susky1990 发表于 2014-9-24 16:01:19 | 显示全部楼层
358203708 发表于 2014-9-24 12:42

额  没事的啊  就换到做文书交流的区就可以了  这边可能人少  那边人气旺一点  哈哈
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lizishen2014 发表于 2014-9-26 15:17:22 | 显示全部楼层
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gliang 发表于 2014-10-6 14:52:06 | 显示全部楼层
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