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本帖最后由 sabayon 于 2014-10-2 17:20 编辑

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Because the world is changing so quickly, people noware less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past:
The world is undergoing dramatic changes,with the rise of the standard of life, problems also raise. But, clearly,people are more happy and satisfied nowadays than before.
  
First, the development on methods ofcommunication facilitate the bonds among families and friends. With modern technology,such as mobile phones and e-mails, people around the world can contact witheach other within few seconds through a click on the screen. These gorgeous equipmentsreally make a difference on how people maintain the relationships. Thus, onewill be more happy and satisfied when he shares his experience with familymembers and friends.

Moreover, economics throughout the worldhas been stimulated to a record height, as a consequence, the living standardhas raised. Globalization, which promotes the assignment and collaborationacross the boundaries, has enormously boosted efficiency and productivity.Therefore, there are more products  thathave better quality, which greatly contribute to the well-being of human. For onthing, not only does it increases the opportunities for us to choose what welike, but more alternatives we choose from. For another, the desire that wantto buy those delicate goods is a major incentive that drive people towardshard-working, which in turn, cause further enhance in efficiency andproductivity. As stated above, people today do possess more wealth and enjoy abetter life .


Finally, today society's open attitudetowards the variety of races, beliefs and thoughts makes it easy to express ourselves.I would never dare to comment on the government's policies  hundreds years ago, but now, I do saysomething about political occasionally. So it is the freedom of expression thathelp people gain more happiness and satisfaction

All in all, given the consideration of  convenient communication among families and friends,raising living standard of citizens and a chance to better express individualthoughts, I would say people are more happy and more satisfied with theirlives.
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