网站自动给我测评的，说的很有道理，我就是觉得有点贵，不过我也不知道行情，大家觉得呢
话说我的简历可能真的很悲催，挂到hired上两个星期都没几个公司看，也没有拿到interview，可能真的需要改改。
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Thank you for choosing Beyond.com for your resume critique. In our years of operation, we've learned what employers are looking for in job-seeker resumes. We've also learned how job seekers can showcase their skills and qualifications while avoiding mistakes that could hurt their chances for employment. Our goal for this critique was to provide you an honest, direct assessment of your current resume. By using an intelligent program that we created, we have scored your resume based on an evaluation of its content, structure and other key factors. Your resulting score is located in the upper-right corner of this page. After evaluating your resume, we believe it needs some improvement to pass the 30-second test and avoid falling victim to some of the latest screening techniques being used by employers. Your resume should make hiring managers want to read more about you. It should show why you would be a great employee and create excitement about your skills and qualifications. Your resume doesn't miss the target by much, but we suggest seeking professional assistance to improve your aim. A professional resume writer can showcase you as a prime candidate, help you stand apart from the hundreds of other applicants, and help you land your next interview. At the bottom of this 2-page critique you will find detailed information on our resume writing service. We encourage you to call and speak with one of our Career Advocates at (888) 447-1193 or email ResumeCritique@Beyond.com to discuss your critique. If you call within the next 48 hours, you will receive a 15% discount off of the regular price.Ready to move forward now? Click here to order professional resume writing with your limited-time offer. Here is some specific feedback regarding your resume:
As a professional it is imperative to demonstrate that you can make an impact in any organization. By writing a resume that effectively depicts your skills and experiences, you can quickly get the attention of hiring managers. Writing a resume that gets you noticed takes skill and experience. Your resume needs to demonstrate that you can be a major contributor and add to the bottom line and it needs to compel them to continue reading. THE CONTENT OF YOUR RESUME - You have included a career summary in your resume. This is the right choice for someone with your experience. Here is the career summary that we evaluated:"5+ years experience as .NET Software Engineer Expert in .NET / C# /WPF programming, Data Structure and Algorithm Familiar with T-SQL, ADO.NET, WCF, Quartz, DevexpressTFS Good at OOP/D, design patter teaching experience in Samsung Electronics. Project support and configuration manager experience. Easy to adapt different development approach. Working knowledge of C++, Linq"
Keep in mind, your career summary should be clear and concise. It should contain impactful statements about yourself and what you have to offer. Remember, this section is your chance to market yourself for your desired position. - Unfortunately, your existing resume gives the impression that you are a "doer" and not an "achiever." Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not results-based - telling what you did, rather than illustrating what you achieved. Employers and recruiters are looking for results-oriented resumes that help them envision how you could be an asset to their organizations. Your resume needs to show how you've made a difference or exceeded expectations, preferably with quantifiable information or data.
THE STRUCTURE OF YOUR RESUME - Your resume structure is clear and consistent, which means you're making it easy for recruiters and hiring managers to take in your key points within each section. Now that you have a solid foundation, see if there are any improvements that can make your resume structure even more fluid.
- It looks like your resume could use more bullets in certain sections. Three to six bullets is the ideal number for your most recent jobs, while one to three will suffice to summarize earlier positions. Each one should be brief and descriptive, to convey information quickly and effectively. To help you focus on the most important information, make sure your bullets are results-based, highlighting what you achieved as a result of what you did.
ADDITIONAL POINTERS ABOUT YOUR RESUME - Based on your industry and your level of experience, the length of your resume appears to be right in line with your competition ( your resume is about 347 words). While it is important to have the correct spacing for margins left/right and top/bottom, it is equally as important to have that good balance of content for the reader.
- Nice job, you have listed your work experience in the right order (reverse chronological), with your most recent experience first. You should also try to qualify and quantify your past accomplishments whenever possible to give them greater impact.
- In your resume, you incorporated personal pronouns. This is something that you should consider changing. Personal pronouns (I, me, my, etc.) should be avoided as they are not necessary and may be a bit awkward. In fact, many recruiters and hiring managers consider it incorrect and unprofessional.
- We noticed that you are not completely consistent in your resume with your verb tense. It is very important to pay close attention to your use of past and present tense. Mixing the two is confusing and can make you appear unprofessional. It also shows a lack of attention to detail which will be a red flag for employers considering you for an open position.
- Good job, the email address that you are using appears to be suitable for your job search. Your email address should be professional so that it does not raise any flags with hiring managers.
OUR RECOMMENDATION To reiterate, we believe that your resume could do a much better job of selling hiring managers on your value as a potential employee. We are concerned that your skills may be overlooked. In today's extremely competitive job market, you need to win over hiring managers quickly and convincingly. Without some overall improvements, your resume probably won't generate the attention it deserves. We'd be happy to help you create a better resume. Through our professional Resume Writing Service, you will work with a professional resume writer, who can help you perfect your resume and showcase your distinctive skills and qualifications. Your writer will be chosen based upon your industry and experience. They will provide expert help in choosing keywords for your resume so it will resonate with hiring managers instead of falling victim to some of the latest screening techniques. All in all, we feel we can help you get through the gatekeeper and be called for more interviews. The cost of having your resume written by a professional is normally $299. However, for the next 48 hours, you can receive a 15% discount. That's only $249 (a $50 savings). This offer expires on 05/29/2015. Click here to take advantage of this special offer or call 888-447-1193 to speak with a Career Advocate. Here is some additional information on our Resume Writing Service:
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