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金牌老公 发表于 2015-9-27 11:58:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式



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大家好 我是大四学生,想申请硕士,目前写了一篇陶瓷信,拜托大家给意见,给指导!!谢谢大家的关爱!!

. 鍥磋鎴戜滑@1point 3 acres

My name is×××,an international applicantfor Master of Food Science program at your department. I am pursuing mybachelor’s degree of Food Science and Engineering a×× Universityin China at present and hope to continue my study at your department.

As I noticed from your CV on the ×××website ,your recent research involves food science and functional foods. I read some ofyour publications in recent years. I am interested in your research on the microencapsulationof L-5-methyltetrahydrofolic acid with ascorbate to improve the stability ofbaked bread and also fortified noodles. I think these research will have greatapplied values in food market. What is more, I found that you are doing researchon the functional and health properties of cranberry ,and cranberry can beadded to diary product so as to mitigate lipid oxidation reactions .However itshealthy and functional traits on human bodies seems can be found out more .And Iam also very interested in this field.
In the past one and half years, I have been doingresearch in the laboratory of Professor×××, who is focoused on developingnew soybean food, and new technology of vegetable protein’s processing andapplication .My research is mainly focused on simplifying the evaluationindicator system of soymilk. In my experiment , twenty-five leading cultivarsof soybean from different provinces in China were tested , their seeds’ severalindexes and soymilk’s some indexes were determined. I chose principal componentanalysis and clustering analysis to pick out 8 indexes on behalf of all theindexes.
In previous project, I learned how to design theexperiment , and how to use statistical methods to analyze the data.I believe thesecapabilities will be helpful to your research project. I deeply realize that I havea very deeper interest in this major . Pursuing my master degree ××× is oneof my top choices, and working with you can definitely advance my academiccareer.

I am wondering if you have any plan to recruit anew master candidate in 2016 fall,? Do you need my CV and transcript to see if mybackground is suitable to work in your group?

I am looking forward to your reply.

madridistalaker 发表于 2015-9-27 22:45:31 | 显示全部楼层
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lfbh222 发表于 2015-10-11 10:07:33 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 金牌老公 发表于 2015-11-2 20:06:59 | 显示全部楼层
madridistalaker 发表于 2015-9-27 22:45
第一封的话不用这么详细吧,先简单问一下招不招人、对中国学生有没有兴趣,对方感兴趣的话在深入的套。话说 ...

不是啦 我是申请研究型的 需要陶瓷
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 楼主| 金牌老公 发表于 2015-11-2 20:07:27 | 显示全部楼层
lfbh222 发表于 2015-10-11 10:07
太长啦,我一打开看着满满的字都不想读下去了,第一段说自己是学啥的,哪里学校。第二段你的方向和我的方向 ...

好的谢谢~~但是我看一些帖子说 这么套老师就不回==
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