It is mypleasure to introduce you a student of mine,XXX, at school of XXX in XXX, China.
I got to know XXX after he tookone of my courses entitled as “Introduction to Nanomaterials” forundergraduates.
During the class, I appreciate hispositive study attitude and was often impressed by his curiosity for advancedresearches in this field.
结尾段跟大家都差不多，我就不放上来了， 大意就是：“XXX学生是well-tained 我对他很有信心，他能在未来的学院里有所有共享，我支持他的学习，有问题可以联系我”
所以我想问问 这中间的内容这样简单是不是不好啊 不detail 太vague
就感觉是 老师觉得这学生不行 所以干脆就不写很多