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[文书-求改] 这个时候了文书还没有改好!!!求指点啊

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453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 19:07:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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Dear Colleagues:
   Mr. Gao Youxing requested a letter of reference from me to support his application for graduate studies at your university. As his research adviser when he was an undergraduate student in my school of Electronics Science and Technology, I am pleased to comply with his request.   
   I have known Mr. Gao since 2014, when he became a group member in my research team. As his research adviser, I directed his research and found him a promising youth radiating with intelligence and creativity. The first time when he sent me a message showing his interest in joining in my team, I can feel his ambition and creativity. Because as an undergraduate student who just entered this school for two years he told me so many of his personal idea and thoughts in solar cell area. In that massage he persuade me to accept him by saying that he had a dream to change the world since he was a child and he believe that using solar cell based on INGaN nanowire can achieve a cheap and Highest efficient solar cell system. Even though there are some flaws in his perspectives and ideas, for an undergraduate students, having so much enthusiasm and creativity for science is precious.
   What impressed me mostly is his hard work. We distributed some literature research and experiment tasks to him. Because he lack of some basic knowledge comparing to those graduate students, he really had some hard time in understanding some contents in thesis and he asked me a lot questions when he did literature research. Moreover, shorting of experimental experience about how to use our equipment to grow GaN or InN nanowires which were grown from nanoscale catalyst patterns by vapor-liquid-solid mechanism left him considerable troubles in finishing experiment tasks. But he practiced again and again until he can use these equipment skillfully. Therefore frequently, I saw him was the last one who left the lab.
    Judging by his outstanding performance in my research group, I am convinced that Mr. Gao has the potential abilities to become a creative and brilliant researcher. I therefore lend him my enthusiastic support and would appreciate your favorable consideration of his application. . 鐣欏鐢宠璁哄潧-涓浜╀笁鍒嗗湴

From: Huang Hui
Department of Electronics Science and Technology
Dlian University of Technology
Dalian, Liaoning, China  
November 29, 2015  
 楼主| 453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 19:08:18 | 显示全部楼层
没人回我,自己先顶!d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b
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 楼主| 453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 19:20:06 | 显示全部楼层
好多错误,给点建议吧,各位!!!
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 19:44:53 | 显示全部楼层
http://www.1point3acres.com/bbs/thread-68308-1-1.html,你自己看看这个贴吧
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 19:45:00 | 显示全部楼层
我也正在改
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 楼主| 453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 20:08:29 | 显示全部楼层
ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 19:45. from: 1point3acres.com/bbs
我也正在改

你打算找机构帮忙改?我自己作文水平很差,所以自己改就只是换一种出错方式而已。
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:12:21 | 显示全部楼层
453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 20:08. 鍥磋鎴戜滑@1point 3 acres
你打算找机构帮忙改?我自己作文水平很差,所以自己改就只是换一种出错方式而已。

我已经找机构了,反正改完感觉比自己写的好多了,你需要不,我可以发你个链接,就是类似邀请啥的
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 楼主| 453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 20:13:52 | 显示全部楼层
ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:12.鏈枃鍘熷垱鑷1point3acres璁哄潧
我已经找机构了,反正改完感觉比自己写的好多了,你需要不,我可以发你个链接,就是类似邀请啥的

当然好啊。
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:15:31 | 显示全部楼层
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:17:17 | 显示全部楼层

我用的就是Mydocumate, 你可以去刚才我给你那个帖子里面看一看。我也没有用过别的,没法评价。反正这个感觉不太贵,一封推荐信就300块钱,最起码比我改的好多了,你自己看着办吧
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 楼主| 453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 20:23:44 | 显示全部楼层
ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:17. 涓浜-涓夊垎-鍦帮紝鐙鍙戝竷
我用的就是Mydocumate, 你可以去刚才我给你那个帖子里面看一看。我也没有用过别的,没法评价。反正这个感 ...

你选的是深度修改吧
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ShalynChin 发表于 2015-12-1 20:27:30 | 显示全部楼层
453576015 发表于 2015-12-1 20:23
你选的是深度修改吧

对,反正感觉挺便宜,改完读起来顺多了
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