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vanessazhang52 发表于 2016-10-23 05:55:33 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式


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发现一篇不错的PS, 作者拿到了stanford MS Offer + MIT PHD Offer 。所以发到这里供大家参考。求加分呀亲!. more info on 1point3acres.com

Statement of Purpose

When I think about the different realms of science and technology, it is hard to think of a domain that
is going to change the world as much as advanced software will, in the decades ahead.
If Ray Kurzweil is right in his book “Singularity is Near”, we are near the end of ‘Epoch 4’ (Technology)
and entering into ‘Epoch 5’ (The Merger of Human Technology with Human Intelligence). In
the distant future, as Ray points out in his book - advanced technology will enable us to have an artificial
heart, knees, and almost any other part of the human body. Paralysis due to spinal injuries could be
overcome by using specialized electronics that would allow paraplegics to regain control over their muscles.
While Ray’s ideas are interesting and exciting to think about, in the near future I foresee computer
science being used as a tool, as mathematics is used, for all the fields of science. It has always been
important for physicists, chemists and biologists to have some understanding of specific areas of mathematics
to express their ideas, to write down formulas, and to make predictions. Similarly, in the near
future, computer software will become an integral part of the research to create new breakthroughs.
For instance, all fields of science collect and analyze a large amount of data. Finding patterns in large
amounts of data has always been a stumbling block. However, by using state of the art software for data
mining and machine learning, hidden trends and patterns may emerge that can help increase understanding
and solve problems. Similarly, with the vast amounts of data in genomics, we can use various data
mining techniques to find patterns that advance our understanding of how the human body functions,
including understanding some of the brain’s intricacies. These patterns could also help with disease
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logical culmination of my passion for Artificial Intelligence and Computer Science in general.
I earned my undergraduate degree in Computer Science [Elective - Artificial Intelligence] at the University
of Pune with the grade ‘First Class with Distinction’. Also, I was the topper of the undergraduate
program at my school. Prior to my undergraduate degree, I have been the topper in Mathematics and
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number of participants and sponsors in the history of the college.
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won many of them. I always enjoyed the practical aspects of my studies, and that is one of the reasons
why my marks in lab exercises, term work, oral examinations, practical examinations, and projects averaged
above 85%, the highest in my school. I also developed various small software tools for my school,
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support to x64 architecture (native x64 packaging support)’, ‘CRS(Common Reboot Service) framework’,
‘Policy based power management’, ‘Intel AMT support’; ‘Marimba AMT Java SDK for Channel
developers’, ‘Session migration of marimba client to better manage installation of user application when
migrating from session 0’, ‘Certificate management’ and ‘Code signing module of Marimba (rewrote in
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Throughout my stay at BMC, I had the opportunity to mentor many undergraduate and graduate
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vivaroma 发表于 2016-10-30 05:31:01 | 显示全部楼层
作者 http://people.csail.mit.edu/anantb/
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lulilu 发表于 2016-11-1 16:07:25 | 显示全部楼层
shulalawoolala 发表于 2016-10-30 05:46
表示 这是因为人牛啊并不是因为PS写得好啊 这PS到底被没被审阅过还两说呢

同意 感觉是正常的 PS 但是经历很厉害
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shulalawoolala 发表于 2016-10-30 05:46:41 | 显示全部楼层
表示 这是因为人牛啊并不是因为PS写得好啊 这PS到底被没被审阅过还两说呢
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小兔子跑到乌托邦 发表于 2016-10-24 12:21:26 | 显示全部楼层
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mikemike0 发表于 2016-10-24 20:11:35 | 显示全部楼层
希望也能寫出如此的SOP  lol
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