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philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:44:59 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:45:24 | 显示全部楼层
Education Background
09/2013-Present, 某弱211 , Wuhan, China
B.S. in Computer Science and Technology, Expected 06/2017
GPA: Overall 85.0/100 Major 89.0/100  Rank: Top 3% among 120 students
        09/2015 Academic Excellence Award for TOP1 in major, College of Informatics, XX大学, Wuhan, China
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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:45:43 | 显示全部楼层
Internship
06/2016-09/2016Technical Consultant, IBM (International Business MachinesCorporation), Shanghai, China
Ø  Collaborated with developers,consultants and users from 3 Fortune 500 companies(IBM, SAP and GreenlandGroup)
Ø  Maintained SAP EnterpriseResource Planning(ERP) System; used se38 function to update and correctpermissions in the system
Ø  Trained by experts of IBM and SAP for 2 weeks
Ø  Provided hundreds of userswith technical support about Financial Accounting and Controlling module of ERPsystem; identified by both users and colleagues as a reliable consultant
07/2014-08/2014 Salesman, Marketing Department, Dell Inc. , Wuhan,China
Ø  Attended Dell’sprofessional trainings about marketing, selling and teamwork
Ø  Introduced technical specifications(performance,special function, etc.) of PCs to customers and offered technical support inboth software and hardware
Ø  Sold 12 PCs in onemonth, which ranked 1 in the team

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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:46:44 | 显示全部楼层
Projects
07/2015-08/2015 Leader, Gene Music Software (Java), XX大学, Wuhan, China
Thefunction of the software is translating DNA sequence into music tone and thenplay the music with music score display.
Ø  Object-oriented analysis andmodeled class diagram and use case diagram by using Rational Rose
Ø  Designed the graphical user interfaceusing WindowBuilder in Eclipse
Ø  Programmed music play module withJava MIDI API and configuration module
Ø  Coordinated the work of the team;improved code quality;identified by mentor as the most outstanding project

09/2016 Individual Project, Network Traffic Analyzer, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Designed an algorithmto identify the process of establishing and releasing TCP connection; used Hashtable to store IP headers
Ø  Developed the analyzerthat includes traffic statistic classified by IP address, protocol andupload/download
Ø  Coded with libpcap APIto implement capturing packets from Internet layer and filtering packets byprotocol, IP address and port

10/2015-12/2015 Individual Project, Multi-DatasourceEducation Management Information System based on Spring MVC, WEB Development Technology, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Used PowerDesigner to designrelevant databases running on MySQL 5.0
Ø  Implemented the transition of databasebased on Spring Aspect Oriented Programming(AOP)
Ø  Acquired lore of web developingthrough reading Head FirstJSP&Servlet, Spring in Action andSpring 3.x Practice in Enterprise Development


06/2015 Leader, App for Car Sharing (Android), Software Engineering, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Made a 7-days project schedule andreconciled dispute in the team
Ø  Designed a mediatorbetween database and client that handles data access
Ø  Made a presentation to introducethe App and got the first prize in class


06/2015, Individual Project, 8259 Chip Project, Principles of Microcomputer and Interface Techniques, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Used Proteus to design routingamong 8086(microprocessor), 8259(Interrupt Controller), 8253(Interval Timer)and 8255(Peripheral Interface chip)
Ø  Implemented suspendabletimer by using interrupt technique; designed address decoding according torouting
Ø  Coded control program withassembly language

10/2014,Individual Project, Extension of Instruction Set Architecture in CP226, Principles of Computer Composition, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  The only one whofinished the project among 120 students
Ø  Extended MOV instructionin supporting data transition from register to register
Ø  Designed two arithmeticand logic instructions(NEG and RCL) by using ALU

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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:48:04 | 显示全部楼层
CV好像不需要写和申请无关的内容?

Leadership
05/2015-01/2016 DiningHall Inspector, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Discussed price issueof dining halls with dining hall directors, who latterly decreased food priceby 30%
Ø  Collected problems of adining hall by communicating with over 50 customers
Ø  Assisted the dininghall in improving food hygiene, food quality and service quality
Ø  Created a networkplatform in which problems of dining halls were discussed and solved; reducedcomplains to dining hall by 50%
09/2013-01/2015 Vice President, Computer Association, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Acted as the lecturerof popularization of computer science lecture for several times
Ø  Assisted in and attendedthe activity of fixing computer once three weeks
10/2013-09/2014 Minister of Public Relation Department, MemoryAssociation, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Hosted for a lecture withmore than 200 audience
10/2013-9/2014 Key Member of Football Fan Association, XX大学, Wuhan, China
Ø  Organized and tookpart in trainings of football playing
Ø  Be involved in variousschool competitions

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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:48:31 | 显示全部楼层
Skills
Computer Languages: Java/ Java EE, C, Debugskills
Computer Skills: Spring MVC
Mastered Courses: Software Engineering, Database,Computer Network, UML, Principles of Computer Composition

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sly1061101 发表于 2016-10-23 23:53:04 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:45
Education Background
09/2013-Present, 某弱211 , Wuhan, China
B.S. in Computer Science and Technolo ...

感觉Top 3% among 120有点别扭 如果给了绝对数值那自己的排名一般也给绝对数值吧,不然直接说百分比不用说总数

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sly1061101 发表于 2016-10-23 23:54:54 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:48
CV好像不需要写和申请无关的内容?
Leadership05/2015-01/2016 DiningHall Inspector, XX大学, W ...
. visit 1point3acres.com for more.
理工科类的跟专业没大关系的经历的话确实作用不大

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sly1061101 发表于 2016-10-23 23:55:32 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:46
Projects07/2015-08/2015 Leader, Gene Music Software (Java), XX大学, Wuhan, China Thefunction of the  ...

经历很丰富很对口啊……真好

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Demostronger 发表于 2016-10-23 23:56:29 | 显示全部楼层
小标题能加复数的都应该是复数

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yuanqijiong 发表于 2016-10-24 13:09:22 | 显示全部楼层
CV in one page is the best

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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-24 21:40:28 | 显示全部楼层
sly1061101 发表于 2016-10-23 23:55.1point3acres缃
经历很丰富很对口啊……真好

大部分是coursework
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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-24 21:45:11 | 显示全部楼层
yuanqijiong 发表于 2016-10-24 13:09
CV in one page is the best

这个太难啦,教育背景和实习经历一放就已经半页纸了,再放几个项目就两页
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yuanqijiong 发表于 2016-10-24 23:35:49 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-24 21:45. visit 1point3acres.com for more.
这个太难啦,教育背景和实习经历一放就已经半页纸了,再放几个项目就两页

对,我也知道,我自己也放不下==但是我们系头头是说一定要控制在一面以内,你也可以再去问问老师,个人意见仅供参考
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 楼主| philc0 发表于 2016-10-25 00:03:19 | 显示全部楼层
yuanqijiong 发表于 2016-10-24 23:35
对,我也知道,我自己也放不下==但是我们系头头是说一定要控制在一面以内,你也可以再去问问老师,个人意 ...

国外学校的系主任吗?还是国内的呀
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yuanqijiong 发表于 2016-10-25 11:08:29 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-25 00:03.鏈枃鍘熷垱鑷1point3acres璁哄潧
国外学校的系主任吗?还是国内的呀

国内的 在国外读了书回来的 个人意见仅供参考辣

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copperface 发表于 2016-10-27 08:58:43 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:45
Internship06/2016-09/2016Technical Consultant, IBM (International Business MachinesCorporation), Sha ...

Trained by experts of IBM ..这一条可以说明一下两周训练学到了什么,给出一个结果
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copperface 发表于 2016-10-27 09:05:20 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:45
Internship06/2016-09/2016Technical Consultant, IBM (International Business MachinesCorporation), Sha ...

Salesman, Marketing Department, Dell Inc.第二个实习,描述工作内容的部分多了点,然后介绍自己的实习成功的内容比例偏低了,觉得可以把1,2两条整合一下,然后诸如3的这种有数字支撑的成果类内容,多写点

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copperface 发表于 2016-10-27 09:54:55 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:46. 1point3acres.com/bbs
Projects07/2015-08/2015 Leader, Gene Music Software (Java), XX大学, Wuhan, China Thefunction of the  ...

Coordinated the work of the team;improved code quality;identified by mentor as the most outstanding project这一条前两个描述没有太大必要,或者可以阐述具体,improve quality是怎么体现的。

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copperface 发表于 2016-10-27 10:00:56 | 显示全部楼层
philc0 发表于 2016-10-23 23:46
Projects07/2015-08/2015 Leader, Gene Music Software (Java), XX大学, Wuhan, China Thefunction of the  ...

Acquired lore of web developing... 把自己看过的数作为项目成果,这个有待商榷啊~换成中文去看,我感觉会有点奇怪~
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