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[PS/CV] Writing the Statement of Purpose - UC Berkeley

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wangziqi000 发表于 2017-11-9 19:36:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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感觉更多学校要求的PS指的是这个
Writing the Statement of Purpose
The statement of purpose should convince readers– the faculty on the selection committee– that you have solid achievements behind you that show promise for your success in graduate study. Think of the statement of purpose as a composition with four different parts.

鏉ユ簮涓浜.涓夊垎鍦拌鍧. Part 1: Introduce yourself, your interests and motivations
Tell them what you’re interested in, and perhaps, what sparked your desire for graduate study. This should be short and to the point; don’t spend a great deal of time on autobiography.

Part 2: Summarize your undergraduate and previous graduate career
a) Research you conducted. Indicate with whom, the title of the project, what your responsibilities were, and the outcome. Write technically, or in the style of your discipline. Professors are the people who read these statements.
. From 1point 3acres bbs
b) Important paper or thesis project you completed, as well as anything scholarly beyond your curricular requirements.

c) Work experience, especially if you had any kind of responsibility for testing, designing, researching or interning in an area similar to what you wish to study in graduate school.
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Part 3: Discuss the relevance of your recent and current activities
If you graduated and worked prior to returning to grad school, indicate what you’ve been doing: company or non-profit, your work/design team, responsibilities, what you learned. You can also indicate here how this helped you focus your graduate studies.

Part 4: Elaborate on your academic interests
Here you indicate what you would like to study in graduate school in enough detail to convince the faculty that you understand the scope of research in their discipline, and are engaged with current research themes.
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a) Indicate the area of your interests. Ideally, pose a question, define a problem, or indicate a theme that you would like to address, and questions that arise from contemporary research. This should be an ample paragraph!
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b) Look on the web for information about departments you’re interested in, including professors and their research. Are there professors whose research interests parallel yours? If so, indicate this. Check the specific program; many may require you to name a professor or professors with whom you might work.

c) End your statement in a positive manner, indicating your excitement and readiness for the challenges ahead of you..鐣欏璁哄潧-涓浜-涓夊垎鍦

Essential Tips.鐣欏璁哄潧-涓浜-涓夊垎鍦
1. What the admissions committee will read between the lines: self-motivation, competence, potential as a graduate student.

2. Emphasize everything from a positive perspective and write in an active, not a passive voice.. 鐗涗汉浜戦泦,涓浜╀笁鍒嗗湴

3. Demonstrate everything by example; don’t say directly that you’re a persistent person, show it.

4. If there is something important that happened to you that affected your grades, such as poverty, illness, or excessive work, state it. Write it affirmatively, showing your perseverance despite obstacles. You can elaborate more in your personal statement.. 鐗涗汉浜戦泦,涓浜╀笁鍒嗗湴

5. Make sure everything is linked with continuity and focus.

6. Unless the specific program says otherwise, be concise; an ideal essay should say everything it needs to with brevity. Approximately 500 to 1000 well-selected words (1-2 single space pages in 12 point font) is better than more words with less clarity and poor organization.

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jack57lee 发表于 2017-11-14 01:16:53 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
感谢分享!很有用的材料。
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zjlxgxz 发表于 2017-11-14 18:43:26 | 显示全部楼层
這個總結很好,我找到一份專門為CS 申請者的PS、SOP提意見的,我總結出來了:

Summarize the previous:
a.        Write technically (My thoughts and ideas.)
b.        Anything beyond curricular required.
c.        Working experience (Know the development procedure, demo, …)
2.        What did I learn in the recent or current activities.
a.        Responsibility
b.        How this help me focus further studies
3.        What you like to study in detail to convince the faculty that you understand what is going on in this research field
4.        Check professor’s name and their XXXX. Dept. Information

Self-motivation, Competence, potential
Active voice. 鐣欏鐢宠璁哄潧-涓浜╀笁鍒嗗湴
Demo “passion” or anything by example.
Indicate the perseverance despite obstacles. 鐣欏鐢宠璁哄潧-涓浜╀笁鍒嗗湴
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jaja24 发表于 2018-1-1 03:27:06 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢分享~~
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