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独立写作-Teaching is harder than it was in the past

题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.With the explosion of knowledge and information, teach ...

TOEFL zz92117 2014-5-9 6 6421 Ror 2016-12-7 12:49
第一次发帖, 诚意求教

Do you agree or disagree with following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.Some p ...

TOEFL finalboss1987 2014-5-24 4 942 GoldenArcher 2014-5-28 21:10
独立作文第一发求狠批

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The car (automobile) has had a greater effect on society than the airplane.计时写的时候觉得没思路,写 ...

TOEFL gynirvana 2014-4-9 4 966 gynirvana 2014-4-10 17:53
[独立] 4.12机经作文一篇

题目: Rather than help their children do school work, parents should encourage their children do work independently. Do you agree or disagree?Nowadays ther ...

TOEFL ECEPE 2014-4-5 6 902 ECEPE 2014-4-6 23:06
[Comprehensive Writing] TPO 15

Inthis reading material, three reasons are given to prove the advantage and feasibilityof the methods to vanish the cane toad. However, the lecturer raises seri ...

TOEFL ECEPE 2014-4-1 2 887 ECEPE 2014-4-5 23:23
【综合】TPO5 massive building

请大家从时态和语言上斧正字数298The lecturer we heard in the listening material support none of the possible explanation raised in the reading material, and ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-9 1 777 oliviahuang 2014-2-19 18:00
求狠批文章内容、结构、词汇

Question:People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you th ...

TOEFL 凝香夜雪 2014-1-31 6 1103 starsrest 2014-1-31 14:14
求批改,by xiaoyu

do you agree or disagree : in 20 years, people will lead a more leisurely life ________________________________________________________________ Leisure ...

TOEFL jklps 2014-1-14 1 936 perlin 2014-1-14 21:15
求批改! by 晓宇

Do you agree or disagree :your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.----------------------------------------------------------- ...

TOEFL jklps 2014-1-12 2 754 perlin 2014-1-13 00:52
求批:In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage

题目:In order to become financially responsibleadults, children should manage their own money at the young age.自己试着精写了一篇,跟人感觉还是欠批。尤其 ...

TOEFL aifer 2013-12-8 13 4666 aifer 2013-12-16 15:54
11月9日鸡精作文:students will not use printed books anymore

写到第二个观点的时候发现字数已经差不多了,所以只写了两个。时间差不多一小时,又超标了……分享一下题目:In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed ...

TOEFL smellycat 2013-11-2 3 1939 qingshan412 2013-12-11 22:27
耗时一个半,又修改一个小时,真诚求批改

题目:Which of the following would you change to improve your health: 1. The kind of food you eat 2. The amount of exercise 3. The amount of stress.正文字数 ...

TOEFL 刘心惠 2013-12-1 5 1026 perlin 2013-12-3 11:10
独立:Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable

题目:Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.Everyone needs advice at times, ...

TOEFL RonHe 2013-11-25 6 9394 perlin 2013-11-26 22:42
【独立】more salary for university professor

To improve the quality of education, university should spend more money on salary for university professor.提纲:不同意,提高薪水作用不大。同时,学生的态度 ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-12 2 853 qingshan412 2013-11-26 11:02
鸡精作文求改 商人重利吗?

abstract:反对1. 经济利益和无私奉献,不矛盾(每个社会人都最求高收入,商人可以实现经济利益,并同时实现社会价值)2. 很多商人很无私,乐于促进社会发展(亚马逊平 ...

TOEFL GRE大神 2013-11-20 8 789 GRE大神 2013-11-24 23:12
11月9日鸡精people can make friends with guy who has more money

People can make friends with guy who has more money观点一:People are more likely to get financial support from rich friends with they are in trouble.观点二 ...

TOEFL smellycat 2013-11-4 5 1090 smellycat 2013-11-24 18:03
T求改

电视节目的目的是否应该是教育而非娱乐?Recently, government has restricted the freedom of entertainment on television across the country. To some extent, the f ...

TOEFL mingneng 2013-11-7 1 608 perlin 2013-11-17 22:57
【综合】求各路高人重拍TPO7~ecocertification

The lecturer who we hear in the listening material totally disagrees with what we have learned from the reading passage, and points out its flaws with cogent ev ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-13 5 725 perlin 2013-11-16 11:39
【独立】public recognition

感觉越来越不会写了,论证不知道怎么才能充分,语言也不知道怎么才能自然,跪求各路大神指点!!!这里的例子也不知道用什么,也没有两段之后再让步一段,会不会让分数降 ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-14 4 1658 perlin 2013-11-16 09:29
more or less dependent

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.希望大家主要从语言和思路上拍 ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-8 3 962 JustForR 2013-11-11 17:19
跪求拍砖move out vs stay

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who move out of their native village or town are happier and more successful than those who stay i ...

TOEFL 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-3 2 1025 巴斯光年2013 2013-11-4 21:54

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