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求各路大神狠狠挑刺!题目:父母从孩子学到的比孩子从父母学到的更多

Adults are always willing to educate their offspring with their own worldview, but they do not realize that children’s perspectives are intrinsically different ...

TOEFL 蝶越沧海 2019-8-14 2 306 蝶越沧海 2019-9-15 18:56
TPO3-综合写作求改

TPO3-综合写作- Rembrandt 画作(题目kmf上有,抱歉发不了链接)在kmf上评测一直是4分,但自己感觉听力的点都写全了,看5分的作文写的点也都是一样。不知道怎么改了。 ...

TOEFL hellopipu333 2019-9-15 0 135 hellopipu333 2019-9-15 15:37
做事越快越好但容易出错还是慢慢做保证每一步做对呢?

新人处女贴请多指教好几个月没写作文了今天干脆就不限时了。。果不其然文思枯竭写了一个多小时挤牙膏才挤出这么多字,不过开头段和第一个论点写的还挺顺的(可能是因为写 ...

TOEFL VincentRow 2019-9-8 0 274 VincentRow 2019-9-8 17:39
托福写作求狠批 O(∩_∩)O谢谢大家

16-03-11真题Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading a student does on his/her own is as important as, or even more important than reading ...

TOEFL satania 2019-1-24 7 495 zdj199583 2019-8-1 19:57
第一次写独立作文,不知道方向求指点

TPO1 independent writing 之前看过一些写作的结构啊,段落安排什么的,然后用1个小时连写带改完成了第一次的独立,各位大神能帮我看看大方向有没有问题吗?These days w ...

TOEFL GuoJSeven 2019-4-1 2 310 re_co_very 2019-7-28 12:04
tpo53独立 修网or修路 求改谢谢给加米!

字数541提问:写作时间总是不够怎么办?这样一篇要写40多分钟枯了..以前写作文总是被老师说扣题扣不住或者偏题 想让大家主要看看有没有这个问题谢谢大家!In the ...

TOEFL Thea_E_ 2019-6-13 1 253 Thea_E_ 2019-6-13 09:26
独立写作,第一次写,求狠狠的批改

题目:TPO41 T2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowaday ...

TOEFL 薛猫G 2018-10-2 1 502 Leo_0201 2018-10-30 10:23
TPO 49 独立写作求批改~

题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is ...

TOEFL hanss 2018-9-14 3 979 hanss 2018-9-15 09:33
TPO21独立写作求批改

限时完成的TPO21的独立写作,希望各位大神给点评分意见。字数:378。语法错误已改,共5处。题目是 Do you agree or diagree with the following statement?For succ ...

TOEFL fayllkw 2018-7-30 6 998 zhuliang06 2018-7-31 11:00
tpo31的独立写作求改,,

先谢谢各位同学了题目是Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or ...

TOEFL 黎明之前 2016-8-29 4 1645 laopeng1000 2018-5-10 06:56
独立写作真题求批改

题目是It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.Honesty might be regarded as one of the most important characters in a relationshi ...

TOEFL zzg1993526 2018-4-24 3 585 zzg1993526 2018-4-28 13:50
11月上旬独立写作机经,请各位大神狠狠地批啊,最近要考试的小伙伴也可以参考下题目

综合Good,独立却是Fair,很不开心,于是开始狂练,以下是第一弹~求大神给意见,thanks~Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Political leaders con ...

TOEFL Oran 2016-11-6 2 1085 yz1024 2018-3-16 05:49
TPO1综合写作

The reading and listening materials have a conflict of opinions about the four-day working mode. The writer believes that a four-day work goes a long way when i ...

TOEFL Jerry_37 2016-9-24 2 1013 Jerry_37 2017-12-16 16:58
小站论坛上改了一次,想问下大家意见

改回来的作文只有21分,改回来的都是英文的,我怀疑是不是外教改的,总之评论里给了一些建议,但是我不是很认同,问问大家怎么感觉Do you agree or disagree: it is bett ...

TOEFL 鱼淼淼 2017-11-22 0 536 鱼淼淼 2017-11-22 18:55
综合写作TPO13 求改

The lecture apparently refutes what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage, the private collectors will damage the study of fossils because ...

TOEFL upupup100 2017-6-20 1 681 zy1996 2017-6-20 14:32
tpo23独立作文求改 我这么写算不算小小跑题啊 求指导

题目:In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. As th ...

TOEFL Jacklx 2017-3-1 8 960 aerodreamer 2017-3-31 03:16
独立作文求改

do you agree or disagree ......for success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.大家帮忙看看 ...

TOEFL qq274880049 2016-11-18 1 942 易潇 2017-1-24 05:21
马上要考试了独立作文才开始求修改TPO1 跪送大米TAT

尝试的是IT DEPENDS式的论述结构,列举了主要的影响因素,心里很虚不知道这个算不算REASON。其次是逻辑自己也分不出来好坏,跪求指点TAT。哭着去自己一个个改句式和单词了 ...

TOEFL 敬哥哥哦哈哟 2016-8-6 1 996 Jerry_37 2016-9-24 16:22
明天考试求大家帮忙改一下作文求一心里安慰

明天就考试了,求一波心里安慰!!!!!TPO24独立写作One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage childrenprepare for adult ...

TOEFL 602689817 2016-8-19 0 724 602689817 2016-8-19 12:04
不好意思又来求批改TPO43,希望有人能给我一些指导

首先很感谢在我上一个求改的帖子里给我提出建议的所有人,让我知道了自己犯的一些低级错误比如标点符号后面没空格和拼写错误,句式和词汇,包括论点和例子之间的逻辑关系等 ...

TOEFL oifhyvsps 2016-7-6 8 3491 sundance1 2016-7-30 13:15
马上就要考试了求改-TPO48独立写作

题目:Because modern life is very complex, it is essentialfor young people to have the ability to plan and organize. TPO48 INDEPENDENTWRITINGBecause modern life ...

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