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第一次发帖 7.25考场原题,作文复盘22, 求各位指出问题~~

Which one is the most important for teacher of high school? (students aged 15 to 18)-Ability to give advice about planning for future.-Ability to recognize ...

TOEFL zylj 2020-8-2 7 511 yemei6677 2020-9-11 15:52
TPO 56 独立写作 求指教~

Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to cr ...

TOEFL ydfrdpp 2020-9-10 1 79 叶汝楠Jerry 2020-9-11 02:02
托福写作一直22左右,感觉是有明显问题但是自己感觉不到,求指教

TPO-40Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to pla ...

TOEFL c0ldstudy 2019-11-2 16 1986 Li透明 2020-8-1 13:27
TPO 49 独立写作 平衡结构 求改

【题目】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time i ...

TOEFL Lucas_Loo 2020-7-23 2 343 Lucas_Loo 2020-7-23 22:13
TPO 50 独立写作求批改~

题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their fie ...

TOEFL qqwsad5 2020-3-11 2 403 AmberCDQO 2020-7-19 05:16
求改托福作文!一直22,23分,求大家指明我前进的方向!跪谢!

1.Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success college or university? 1. Tutors in university 2. The encouragement from fam ...

TOEFL 北冥堃 2019-11-18 10 1141 北冥堃 2019-11-28 01:09
万年作文20出头,想请大家指点一下原因到底出在哪里~

With the rapid development of science and technology, electronic equipments have been widely used by not only adults but also our kids. Recently, the issue that ...

TOEFL qico 2019-10-30 13 1018 氢锂钠钾铷铯钫 2019-11-9 10:40
求各路大神狠狠挑刺!题目:父母从孩子学到的比孩子从父母学到的更多

Adults are always willing to educate their offspring with their own worldview, but they do not realize that children’s perspectives are intrinsically different ...

TOEFL 蝶越沧海 2019-8-14 2 527 蝶越沧海 2019-9-15 18:56
TPO3-综合写作求改

TPO3-综合写作- Rembrandt 画作(题目kmf上有,抱歉发不了链接)在kmf上评测一直是4分,但自己感觉听力的点都写全了,看5分的作文写的点也都是一样。不知道怎么改了。 ...

TOEFL hellopipu333 2019-9-15 0 345 hellopipu333 2019-9-15 15:37
做事越快越好但容易出错还是慢慢做保证每一步做对呢?

新人处女贴请多指教好几个月没写作文了今天干脆就不限时了。。果不其然文思枯竭写了一个多小时挤牙膏才挤出这么多字,不过开头段和第一个论点写的还挺顺的(可能是因为写 ...

TOEFL VincentRow 2019-9-8 0 582 VincentRow 2019-9-8 17:39
托福写作求狠批 O(∩_∩)O谢谢大家

16-03-11真题Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading a student does on his/her own is as important as, or even more important than reading ...

TOEFL satania 2019-1-24 7 709 zdj199583 2019-8-1 19:57
第一次写独立作文,不知道方向求指点

TPO1 independent writing 之前看过一些写作的结构啊,段落安排什么的,然后用1个小时连写带改完成了第一次的独立,各位大神能帮我看看大方向有没有问题吗?These days w ...

TOEFL GuoJSeven 2019-4-1 2 426 re_co_very 2019-7-28 12:04
tpo53独立 修网or修路 求改谢谢给加米!

字数541提问:写作时间总是不够怎么办?这样一篇要写40多分钟枯了..以前写作文总是被老师说扣题扣不住或者偏题 想让大家主要看看有没有这个问题谢谢大家!In the ...

TOEFL Thea_E_ 2019-6-13 1 485 Thea_E_ 2019-6-13 09:26
独立写作,第一次写,求狠狠的批改

题目:TPO41 T2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowaday ...

TOEFL 薛猫G 2018-10-2 1 707 Leo_0201 2018-10-30 10:23
TPO 49 独立写作求批改~

题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is ...

TOEFL hanss 2018-9-14 3 1487 hanss 2018-9-15 09:33
TPO21独立写作求批改

限时完成的TPO21的独立写作,希望各位大神给点评分意见。字数:378。语法错误已改,共5处。题目是 Do you agree or diagree with the following statement?For succ ...

TOEFL fayllkw 2018-7-30 6 1203 zhuliang06 2018-7-31 11:00
独立写作真题求批改

题目是It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.Honesty might be regarded as one of the most important characters in a relationshi ...

TOEFL zzg1993526 2018-4-24 3 792 zzg1993526 2018-4-28 13:50
小站论坛上改了一次,想问下大家意见

改回来的作文只有21分,改回来的都是英文的,我怀疑是不是外教改的,总之评论里给了一些建议,但是我不是很认同,问问大家怎么感觉Do you agree or disagree: it is bett ...

TOEFL 鱼淼淼 2017-11-22 0 741 鱼淼淼 2017-11-22 18:55
综合写作TPO13 求改

The lecture apparently refutes what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage, the private collectors will damage the study of fossils because ...

TOEFL upupup100 2017-6-20 1 884 zy1996 2017-6-20 14:32
tpo23独立作文求改 我这么写算不算小小跑题啊 求指导

题目:In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. As th ...

TOEFL Jacklx 2017-3-1 8 1163 aerodreamer 2017-3-31 03:16
独立作文求改

do you agree or disagree ......for success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.大家帮忙看看 ...

TOEFL qq274880049 2016-11-18 1 1144 易潇 2017-1-24 05:21

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