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0. 打眼一看,比这帖子10月份的版本好多了,有进步!不好意思我点进去了你的linkedin,下次分享给别人看记得要去掉hyperlink 保护隐私哦
1. summary 写的不好,浪费页面space,建议去掉或者重写。如果去掉summary,建议把education放最前面,然后放skills , experience (不需要写work这个词). education, master那个不需要第二个bullet point,不体现能力
2. 这诡异的页边距。。和bullet point前面的空间。。。整个style不咋地。面试时有很多地方会把resume打印出来,得改改margin。
. Waral dи,
3. experience都挺好的!但是写的。。。emmmmm。。。举几个例子你再改改.1point3acres
eg 1. Communicated with Analysts to build Shiny Apps extracting key words and paragraphs, which increased healthcare portfolio return by 50%。The app provides individual sentiment score for each transcript as well as offering comparison sentiment score for companies within the same industries。 (第二条不应该出现在resume)
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可以改成 built interactive web apps in collaboration with xx senior analysts using R, increased return by 50% in healthcare portfolio. 这条就可以用来突出你的programming/R
eg 2. Led a team of 3 reporting analysts re-design 20 legacy reports to assist cross functional partners - Investing, Global Wealth Management
and Compliance Departments to monitor operational efficiency and drive up operational cohesion by 80%
可以改成 Assisted cross functional partners as a team leader of 3 analysts, improved operational cohesion by 80% in xx months. .1point3acres
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总结来说就是你的experience部分,写的很零碎,很多没有必要的jargon,浪费了页面空间,也没有做到summarize你的经历/能力。(还是推荐你看看我之前写的帖子,写简历的那个)比如Took full responsibility你用了两次,但是这个是个很模糊的说法,我看了我也不知道是啥responsibility,也不知道你干了啥,哪里厉害;再比如第一个经历里的machin learning analysis, 是啥捏?你得再仔细改改。我能猜到,你干过的活很relevant,但是从你的简历里读不出来。得做到让别人读了你的简历,读到你在xxx方面做了xxx所以很厉害这种感觉。
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3. technical skills 没必要写的这么碎,可以software:Python, R, 。。。。都写一起。可以再加上比如一条data analysis: regression, time series, 。。。。写一写具体的统计方法啥的 |
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