UCB SOP指导

PS是申请时困扰很多人的东西，说法也会各异，在这里把UC-Berkeley对于PS的官方指导说明贴出来跟大家分享一下。虽然不同学校的说法会有不同，但是核心点Berkeley给的还是差不多了，挺有参考价值的。当然，学校对于篇幅等方面的个性要求大家可以忽略。 

A) Things to Keep in Mind: 

1. What the admissions committee will read between the lines: motivation, competence, potential as a graduate student. 

2. Emphasize everything from a positive perspective and write in an active, not a passive, voice. 

3. Demonstrate everything by example; don't say directly that you're a persistent person, demonstrate it. 

4. You don't want to make excuses, but you can talk about the mistakes you've made as a learning experience. 

5. If there is something important that happened (poverty, illness, excessive work, etc.), which affected your grades go ahead and state it, but write it affirmatively, that is, in a way that shows your perseverance. 

6. Make sure everything is linked with continuity and focus. 

7. The essay should be 500-600 words (1 to 1½ pages) single-space, typed, 12pt. font size. 

B) Writing the Statement of Purpose: 

Part 1: Introduction 

This is where you tell them what you want to study. For example, "I wish to pursue an MS degree in Mechanical Engineering with an emphasis in controls." 

Part 2: Summarize what you did as an undergraduate 

a) Important class or classes you took which stimulated your desire for graduate study, such as a specific project for a class. 

b) Research you did. Indicate with whom, the title of the project, what your responsibilities were, and the outcome. Write technically; professors are the people who read these statements. 

c) Work experience, especially if you had any kind of responsibility for testing, designing, or researching a product or apparatus. 

Part 3: If you graduated and worked for a while and are returning to grad school, indicate what you've been doing while working: company, work/design team, responsibilities, what you learned. You can also indicate here how this helped you focus your graduate studies. 

Part 4: Here you indicate what you want to study in graduate school in greater detail. This is a greater elaboration of your opening paragraph. 

a) Indicate area of interest, then state questions you might have which are associated with the topic, i.e. what you might be interested in studying. You should have an area of emphasis selected before you write the statement. 

谢谢！正愁着呢

UCB 的history statement和SOP两个东西不一样？有点蒙，侧重在哪呀

很实在的评论和建议，不错

重点SOP吧。。history那个貌似你可以写写如何在汶川大地震中存活以及卢旺达王子和难民与你的故事以及我的第三任黑人女朋友之类的话题，。。。。

uknowknow 发表于 2012-11-13 23:40
重点SOP吧。。history那个貌似你可以写写如何在汶川大地震中存活以及卢旺达王子和难民与你的故事以及我的第 ...

说的有理。。。