今天withdraw 了Poly-tech了~~

我这样写应该没问题吧？

Dear Admission Officer:
       I am appreciated to receive the admission from Polytechnic Institute at New York University. After a deep consideration, I regret to inform you that I would like to move forward for my admission process. Please understand that it took me a lot of thinking to make such decision. Again, thank you very much for such great opportunity and your consideration.


ID: XXXXXNAME: XXXX
DOB: XXXXX

Sincerely,

麻倉枼

哦你申请研究生了？ 决定去哪了？

北美农民 发表于 2014-4-7 13:28
哦你申请研究生了？ 决定去哪了？

应该是加州那边啦，那你在哪读啊

你这写的有问题啊 完全不知道在说什么

爱丽丝和鲍勃 发表于 2014-4-7 15:36
你这写的有问题啊 完全不知道在说什么

你英文水平不够啊

麻倉枼 发表于 2014-4-8 08:03
你英文水平不够啊

Agree with that guy. I'm sorry to say this but I don't think you made yourself clear in this email you may have already sent out. It is pretty good to reject them nicely but at least you need to tell you are not going to Poly rather than "moving forward for admission process". Also slight grammar issues seem pretty obvious here. Please double-check and good luck.

麻倉枼 发表于 2014-4-7 16:03
你英文水平不够啊

.. 你这都没有说清楚。 你就大胆地说你要去其他的学校要withdraw my application就好。你第三句话确实不知道在讲什么啊。如果你已发，建议你重发

solomonking 发表于 2014-4-7 21:13
Agree with that guy. I'm sorry to say this but I don't think you made yourself clear in this email ...

anyway, I sent it already..What they need is the word "withdrawal" and DOB, ID, and Name

爱丽丝和鲍勃 发表于 2014-4-7 22:12
你这都没有说清楚。 你就大胆地说你要去其他的学校要withdraw my application就好。你第三句话确实不知道 ...

我也知道自己英文不行啦，他们其实就是想要知道ID，名字，和生日，他们看到withdrawal就知道了。。

小米眼一花，看到move forward for my admission process还以为你要找他们要i20了呢