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[申请文书] 第一版CV,求拍

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第一版CV,努力缩到了一页,感觉真不容易

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lapore 2014-9-3 07:44:40 | 只看该作者
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- Just remove the honor/certificates... I do not think they will care. Maybe a list for courses you learned should be better(like AI,DB,ML,Algo)....--
. 1point3acres
- Something like "proficient in C++,python familiar with MATLAB, SQL"  should be better?
. 1point 3acres
- Why the headers of project names are same as institute names? I think it should be smaller for project names.

If you apply for university, publication should be much above? Put GPA if possible... From 1point 3acres bbs


. 1point 3acres
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Shirley_Qu 2014-9-11 02:34:21 | 只看该作者
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For EXPERIENCE part, you are not using the bullet points and fonts correctly. you don't have to put the project name as a independent title, especially you have only one point under each project.
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Also, try to use verbs instead of pronounce such as "this, that" in your bullet point, it is not professional.. 1point3acres

your content in experience does not provide a clear message of what did YOU do in the project, just a summary of the whole thing. this is not relevant in a CV. Please try and make your contribution clear to the reader of the CV. According to your current CV, it is pretty mediocre regarding the experience part given that you have not specify your contribution and reason why a program/company should acquire you as their asset.

.google  и

Example listed below
Cornell University         Date ..
Undergraduate research intern ( these two lines are fine). 1point 3 acres
- Achieved a small motion blablablablabla by clsutering using blablablabla. (still there is no point in rephrasing each bullet point if your personal achievement does not stand out, please revise on that.)

. Waral dи,Cheers
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zl9394 2014-9-30 21:18:00 | 只看该作者
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research好多啊~~
GPA和ranking呢?
排版有点问题
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