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回复 3# davidcroft
对的~我大部分是按照李笑来的说的做的~但是唯独听力的时候我其实也是做笔记的~找出对立观点~以及支持细节~做简要介绍~下面是我写的一个综合写作~考试的时候应该会比这个写的稍微好点~见笑啦~考了两次T综合都是good(4.0~5.0)~楼主可以比照一下
In the lecture, the professor suggested that the writer has exaggerated the negative consequence caused by the private collectors dealing with fossils, and in fact, these activities could lead to more advantages when comparing to the public collectors, which contradicts the conclusion made in the article. She seems to have three reasons.
To begin with, the writer unfairly claims that the activities of private collectors may cut off the public’s access to fossils. On the contrary, more private collectors could provide more opportunities for public to see these fossils, especially for those public of low level, such as schools. Therefore, the point expressed in the article is seriously jeopardized.
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Moreover, the private collectors, actually, cannot obstruct the potentials of scientists to make crucial discoveries. Before the private collectors obtain these fossils, they have first to be passed through the scientists’ hands, in order to collect the important information. Thus, as a result, the scientists would not miss out any chance to discover important things. Therefore, the suggestion mentioned in the article is open to doubt.
Finally, the private collectors could bring about more positive consequences than negative consequences. We cannot deny the possibility that the private collectors may destroy the scientific evidence associated with the fossils, however, it is because of them that more remains of fossils could be discovered and learned by us. In another words, without them, there may be few fossils that could provide our clues of past times. Thus, the conclusion raised in the article lacks credibility..1point3acres
In summary, because of the above reasons, the professor objects the conclusion made in the article, and assumes that the emergences of these private collectors could eventually make positive effect. |
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