2020秋招DA简历 诚意求批 感谢！

New Graduate 海投了一个月都石沉大海
觉得简历一定是存在非常严重的问题 自己很迷茫不知道怎么 就是不会把自己做的内容漂亮的表达出来
恳请恳请大家狠批狠批
链接： resume

是Teaching Assistant 不是teacher assistant

补充内容 (2019-7-18 09:33):
另外我也是年底12月毕业，投了几家，都说明年1月入职太晚了，lz可以试试9月再投？

时态要一致~

老实说没工作以前我也觉得 2GB|8GB 很厉害很亮眼....后来发现也就还好
另外描述 类似这种   use xx to clean xx + created xx  dashboard  可以更 technical一些。。。可以看看CS的简历里面 这些动词都用的是啥 一般也是 designed & implemented

hwaaron 发表于 2019-7-19 14:01
时态要一致~

老实说没工作以前我也觉得 2GB|8GB 很厉害很亮眼....后来发现也就还好

没有工作经验真的哭了TAT
感恩！说的都在点上

novavistamn 发表于 2019-7-18 09:03
是Teaching Assistant 不是teacher assistant

补充内容 (2019-7-18 09:33):

好的！一起加油！谢谢！

sorry can't type in Chinese now

a few thoughts:
1. An obvious issue is that you did not explain what you did from 2017 to 2018. The hr is going to be wondering what you did after graduating from the ms program
2. The descriptions are mostly "what you did" not "what you have achieved". I would suggest writing them in a more result-oriented manner. For example what kind of feedback did you receive for doing certain projects.