2020年cs sde intern求职简历求意见！回复加米！

想要找的是2020年summer的cs sde类实习，本科不是CS相关，做的一些项目和CS的联系也是勉勉强强，这还是第一版简历。希望各位大神提提意见。

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My two cents...

"Analyzed customer feedback data using machine learning model and other mathematical tools"
What is the data size? GB? TB? PB?
.. What machine learning model?
What math tools?
How do you use these models/tools?

"Coordinated with peers and staffs to optimize the operating logic of the system"
How many peers and staffs?
How do you optimize?
What is the system?
What is the outcome/achievement after the optimization? Reducing latency or complexity?

"Revamped existing user interface of the intelligence system"
How?
Why do you need to revamp?
What is the benefit of the revamp?

For skill section, you can remove photoshop, autocad, etc. No one cares...

Education里面最好写上你的毕业年份，不要只写present。strength列的有点杂了感觉，可以分类写，比如哪些是programming之类的。office这种就可以删掉了。work experience首先要写上你的岗位，是sde还是什么。然后lz每点都写的太general了，缺少细节。