请问可以帮忙看一眼吗, 关于ds/da的简历

请问可以帮忙看一下吗, 海投没什么回应, 觉得可能是简历出了大问题, 请问有大佬可以帮忙看着修改一下吗!!

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Several points I think you could consider improving:

1. personal information: I would suggest you put all information in one line: email |  phone  |  Urbana, Illinois 61802 (open to relocation). Then you save more space for other information

2. Education:  May 2021 -> Expected May 2021, Jun 2019 -> Graduated 2019, you could add GPA if you have one

3. Professional Experiences:
you could use more strong verbs and highlight the impact. For example, your model has improved xxx by xxx%, or contributes to the revenue increase by xxxx. For example:
Developed a model using random forest with Python (scikit-learn) to analyze the potential forex fluctuations based on the database
to update threshold for small transactions, improving xxx by xxx%
• Analyzed millions of data of (delete "data of")forex trading transactions by python (change it to "Python")pandas (can write it as "Python (pandas)") and Tableau to identify the
cause of profit fluctuation, then set up new trading strategy daily (change it to "and developed new trading strategy for daily transactions to support the data-driven decision-making")
• Made customer need analysis (change it to "Performed customer need analysis") by text mining to assist in (change it to "support") product planning and production, such as
building up a cooperation between TaxJar and amazon sellers to pay the seller tax in each state

4. Selected Projects: same advice, more numbers to show the impact, use past tense for all bullet points, strong verbs, ect.

5. Technical Skills: more details, like which frameworks, which modules/libraries, and put them into different categories, like:
data analytics and visualization:
predictive modeling and data mining:
financial analysis:

Hope that helps. I don't have chinese input method on this laptop, so I could only type English. Sorry for that.

楼主记得把个人信息抹去呀！还有就是最好project/intern 多说一点impact, 比如会提高下一年sales by 40% 之类的～ 把影响量化，多用点数字就好

wordvec2 lz 想说的是word2vec吧

楼主现在是不是还没有MS的GPA？简历上切不要一个学位写GPA一个不写GPA

mxydsx 发表于 2019-10-22 15:31
楼主记得把个人信息抹去呀！还有就是最好project/intern 多说一点impact, 比如会提高下一年sales by 40% 之 ...

谢谢提醒, 个人信息都是假的 :)

lele1234 发表于 2019-10-22 21:43
楼主现在是不是还没有MS的GPA？简历上切不要一个学位写GPA一个不写GPA

那能请问一下具体如何处理吗, 因为确实才第一学期...

Humphrey008 发表于 2019/10/23 03:05:30
那能请问一下具体如何处理吗, 因为确实才第一学期...

筛选简历时有的速度很快 这样容易产生误会 比如会自然觉得你把好的gpa写上了 另一个估计就不怎么样 如果要写 是不是在gpa那里写个GPA：pending之类的？这样会避免看的太快产生误会

lele1234 发表于 2019-10-23 05:01
筛选简历时有的速度很快 这样容易产生误会 比如会自然觉得你把好的gpa写上了 另一个估计就不怎么样 如果要 ...

好的 谢谢

风信子 发表于 2019-10-24 06:20
Several points I think you could consider improving:

1. personal information: I would suggest you ...

thx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!