水货第一版PS求改~

因为没有要求PS的字数，而且还要求要有professional experience,所以我的PS里面就没怎么写program，主要写了学习上的东西。。。因为水学渣所以没什么特别好写的，并且语言实在是。。。求各位猛拍，猛提意见~
. When I was in high school, I participated in a study group aiming at taking part in the RoboCupJunior. That is the first time I got to know about robot. Though I quit because of the heavy study task, I had already developed my interest in robot and control system. In the past summer, my teammates and I worked hard to prepare for the RoboCup 2013. During the competition, I found great pleasure in exchanging ideas with other competitors. This experience solidified my interest in robotics and reinforced my determination to pursue a higher degree in the field of robotics.

When I know about the MS-RT program, I think it is the place where I want get further study. As I can learn more about robotics and build real-world and solid program experience. My knowledge of mechanics and electronics will be very useful in this program. Though my major is Measuring & Control Technology & Instrumentations and programing is not my strength, I still can do some basic coding in C/C++. I am confident that my solid engineering background will make up for this and I am qualified to participate in this program.

During the past three years’ college life, I learned a lot about data testing and analyzing, and also have good knowledge of mechanics and electronics. At that time, I think a robot is a machine with simple mechanical structure and circuit, which can do things as we ordered and is more about computer programing. Thus I thought my major has nothing to do with robotics. However, my opinion has changed after I participated in the RoboCup. During this competition, the judgers told me that the most important feature of a robot is intelligence, it needs to react and make decision in real-time according to every complex conditions of the road.

How can a robot get feedback from its users and know about the real-time condition? I think is by analyzing signals from various types of sensors. This is what exactly my major focus on. One of my curriculums, ‘Processing & Analysis of Testing Signal’, taught us how to use Matlab to analyze acquired. Another course named ‘Principe of Intelligent Machine Design’ introduced basic information about intelligent robot.

In addition, my strong hands-on capability and project experience will be another strong point. I always enjoyed long hours in the labs as it gave me the opportunity to correlate theory to practical. While preparing for the RoboCup, I taught myself about the ATMEGA 16A, a single chip microcomputer I had never worked with before. I also worked on the Student Research Training Program (SRTP) and I am responsible for the selection of sensor array of the recognition system. I discussed with my advisor and seniors about this topic and realized that I still have much to learn in the field of control system and engineering and need further study.

My strengths are a strong academic background, sense of teamwork, integrity and ability to put in sustained quality effort consistently. I feel well prepared for the further challenging studies and research in your program.

求好心大神给个意见啊。。。是不是写的太烂都不知道从哪边改才对了。。。。

同是测控专业的啊，看得有点快……
不要说自己不好的地方，换个表达方法。谈理解的东西就不要写了，多挖掘下经历吧。

deyomizy 发表于 2013-11-3 19:26
同是测控专业的啊，看得有点快……
不要说自己不好的地方，换个表达方法。谈理解的东西就不要写了，多挖掘 ...

了解~~测控就是个奇葩啊。。。。。

bear4388 发表于 2013-11-3 22:00
了解~~测控就是个奇葩啊。。。。。

你要申什么方向？

deyomizy 发表于 2013-11-4 15:46
你要申什么方向？

同为测控，蛋疼，你们要申控制吗？

deyomizy 发表于 2013-11-4 15:46
你要申什么方向？

CS。。。周围有人申EE。。。

bear4388 发表于 2013-11-4 16:34
CS。。。周围有人申EE。。。

测控申cs好申吗

个人意见哈。。感觉有点散，最好集中一段写为啥选这个方向，然后集中再写做过什么。。

blechacz 发表于 2013-11-4 16:43
个人意见哈。。感觉有点散，最好集中一段写为啥选这个方向，然后集中再写做过什么。。

恩恩，谢谢~~