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可以试着拿这个AI文书工具生成一下,我试了下效果还不错:https://writing-wise.antopia.net/


**Personal Statement**  From the moment I first touched a computer keyboard, I knew I had found my calling. Growing up in Tianjin, surrounded by the rapid technological advancements, I was captivated by the endless possibilities that computer science offered. This fascination led me to pursue a degree in Computer Science at Tianjin University, where I not only deepened my technical knowledge but also discovered my passion for teaching and community service.  During my junior year, I took a bold step by founding a "Free Programming Course" for my peers. This initiative was born out of my desire to democratize access to coding education, especially for those who lacked the resources or confidence to pursue it. Each week, I dedicated my time to guiding students through the basics of programming, fostering a collaborative learning environment. This experience not only honed my leadership and communication skills but also reinforced my belief in the transformative power of education.  My academic journey has been marked by a relentless pursuit of excellence. My participation in intercollegiate debate competitions, where I twice clinched regional championships, underscores my ability to think critically and articulate complex ideas effectively. These skills are invaluable in the field of computer science, where innovation often requires clear communication and strategic thinking.  UCLA's Computer Science program stands out to me for its cutting-edge research and distinguished faculty. The university's focus on areas such as artificial intelligence, machine learning, and blockchain technology aligns perfectly with my academic interests and career aspirations. I am particularly drawn to the work of Professor Yoshua Bengio, whose contributions to deep learning have revolutionized the field. His research on deep neural networks and generative adversarial networks has profoundly influenced my understanding of machine learning, and I am eager to contribute to this dynamic field under his guidance.  My long-term goal is to leverage my technical expertise to drive innovation in emerging technologies. I envision myself in a research or academic role, where I can continue to push the boundaries of what is possible in computer science. UCLA's commitment to interdisciplinary research and its strong emphasis on practical applications of theoretical knowledge make it the ideal environment for me to achieve these aspirations.  In conclusion, my journey from a curious student in Tianjin to a prospective researcher at UCLA is a testament to my dedication, passion, and resilience. I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to and learn from UCLA's vibrant academic community. I am confident that my background, combined with the rigorous education and research opportunities at UCLA, will enable me to make significant contributions to the field of computer science.  Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of joining UCLA and embarking on this next phase of my academic and professional journey.
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xzk1035793232 2024-12-7 22:25:51 | 只看该作者
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苹果用户_ywh3k 发表于 2024-1-9 19:29
楼主,可以提供一下Sam的联系方式吗

sam怎么样呀,你最后找他改了吗
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xzk1035793232 2024-12-7 22:26:16 | 只看该作者
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OnlineWizard 发表于 2024-10-7 04:12
His previous account was blocked.

新链接是这个 https://www.fiverr.com/eagle_eye_read

请问你找他改过吗?如何呀
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OnlineWizard 发表于 2024-10-06 13:12:13
His previous account was blocked.

新链接是这个
看了你的所有回复,你好像一直在给他推荐…不会是托吧…
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楼主好我想问一下sam可以在cs的专业方面提供帮助吗 因为看简历里面他没有相关经历
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 楼主| lalala_zzz 2024-12-31 09:21:49 | 只看该作者
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两鬓微露的手链 发表于 2024-12-30 15:24
楼主好我想问一下sam可以在cs的专业方面提供帮助吗 因为看简历里面他没有相关经历

主要是语言方面
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所以楼主专业方面的内容主要是由您认识的“23Fall申请结果还不错的前辈、藤校的native speaker……”帮您修改的对吗 谢谢~
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 楼主| lalala_zzz 2024-12-31 23:31:48 | 只看该作者
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两鬓微露的手链 发表于 2024-12-31 16:30
所以楼主专业方面的内容主要是由您认识的“23Fall申请结果还不错的前辈、藤校的native speaker……”帮您 ...

对 其实CS方面的内容别人能改的不多 除非经历相似的学长姐 我感觉GPT都够用了
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xzk1035793232 发表于 2024-12-07 06:25:51
sam怎么样呀,你最后找他改了吗
找了,但是吧我觉得没改出个所以然
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