秋招失败，弱渣求各位大佬指点一下简历，回复加米~

秋招很失败，投了三四十家公司（都是看了job description感觉可能有机会才投的，比如要求机器学习和统计基础，没明确要求工作经验等），只拿到了两个面试机会，其他全部是邮件拒或者默拒。申请了亚马逊的五个机器学习和数科相关的方向全部被拒，所以想来地里请教一下各位大佬，我的简历是不是哪里有问题？求指点求批评，回复加米。拜谢各位！！！

简历链接如下：
https://drive.google.com/file/d/ ... Hp/view?usp=sharing

补充一点跟简历不相关的，楼主有没有试试找别人内推提高简历过关率呢？地里有内推版，也可以linkedin 联系一下。我发现Linkedin联系我的多是印度人，中国同胞很少，一般我都无视印度人，同胞的我都会提供帮助。加油

1. 首先Yanhe同志说的应该work experience 往前放放比较好，我也很同意。education, skills, 然后就先列work experience，并且要把PhD research那条放在前面！请同志们记笔记，简历要按照chronological descending order排列！转专业选手，不用忌讳不相关的经历，可以用一个bullet point写你的research 但是please drop all terminologies -- 写一条特别high-level的说你的专业的东东，但是用那种是人就能看懂的词汇。然后再次同意Yanhe说的，把machine learning 那部分写写到底是啥，比如可以强调统计方法，也可以强调data analysis, it's up to you. 这部分需要加几个bullet point，突出一下quantitative research experience。

然后2019 spring这个，if做的内容跟data不相关，请突出communication and leadership skills!! -- 转专业选手们可以记笔记了 -- 跟专业无关的project/experience, 可以用来突出自己的non-technical skills ！！ 同样写一句大白话summarize你的project，然后写写比如collaborated with senior colleagues啊，presented in group meetings啊, created deliverables啊，you name it!!

整个work experience每条bullet point，你咋突然变成名词开头了呢？得像前面一样，过去式动词开头，每条都是省略主语”我“的句子！


2. 然后列selected projects -- 过多，太杂! 很多地方没必要加上括号缩写！感觉五选四吧，另外每一条都紧扣job description里面的qualification（我之前写了一个帖子，楼主可以参考看看） -- 自己检查，每一条突出了either 统计方法，data analysis, nor communication, leadership 这种软实力！

1. instead of listing "online courses", i'd list tech stack that i know how to use, something like "development tool", AWS/AZURE/KUBERNETES...
2. "Mobile ads click-through rate (CTR) analysis" think of something 高大上，like “youtube ad click through rate prediction model”
   2.1. "machine learning workflow" .. we usually call it pipeline..
   2.2. "records", what records? be specific, youtube records? youtube mobile app records?
   2.3. "important click-through features", how many out of how many? how did you define important? you need to show it.
3." Telecom customer attrition prediction with machine learning". yeah we know it's about machine learning, why dont put model name on it instead of "machine learning". and, what telecom customer? AT&T customer?
   3.1. if you only used simple models and did not tune it a lot, i'd rather not put it on resume.
   3.2. again "important factors", wtf is important factors? again, this looks very weak, i'd not put on resume.
4. "Text document clustering and topic modeling" what model did you use? you can specify that in the title. again, which domain? "IMDB movie"?
   4.1. “word stemming and tokenization” dude what did you use to stem and tokenize words?
   4.2. if you did nlp stuff, did you not use TF-IDF / Bag of words or any other better methods? just PCA?
   4.3. where the f is the metric for this project?
5. "Recommendation systems with Apache Spark" recommendation system for what??? give it a name!
   5.1. how big is Yelp data?
   5.2. what exactly did you recommend?
6. "Long Short-Term Memory (LSTM) network in stock market modeling" => S&P stock price prediction model with LSTM
   6.1. wtf you wrote LSTM in title and you don't mention it at all in project? you only mentioned tf and RNN?..... at least say your baseline model and your improved model, and how your metric boosted...

GAAAAH all the weak projects...
of all the 6 project, i'd only pick 4. Then, 1. do more in-depth work with the project itself, like deeper models (e.g. for 4, i'd at least try using NER, or even go deeper to BERT, that's where nlp is heading...). 2. elaborate more. write more stuff.

OHHHH and you have work experience....
why don't you put them at front/top to show you have "industry-level" experience writing machine learning projects? elaborate them!
1. at least you did reinforcement learning right? elaborate on that!
2. "Ph.D. Research at xxxx - xxxxx, XXX", i'd put things with machine learning on first line, and elaborate specific work done there, model used, etc. everything else is not important at all.

我不是大佬只是一个硕士菜鸡 我看了一下你ml的项目描述的感觉不是很高大上 比如那个lstm模型的感觉就很普通的感觉 像一个期末作业这样

把work experience放上去，多写点？然后多投公司，试试让人内推。

两个面试机会是来自于什么样的公司？进行到哪一步了？

个人觉得你的personal projects 列的有些多。而且都是2019年的。。。不如将相关的research展开写一个。不相关的就不写了吧。

zsr 发表于 2019-12-18 11:59
两个面试机会是来自于什么样的公司？进行到哪一步了？

两家大公司，都面挂了

zsr 发表于 2019-12-18 12:02
个人觉得你的personal projects 列的有些多。而且都是2019年的。。。不如将相关的research展开写一个。不相 ...

这些project基本是今年为了找工作凑简历匆忙做的，，research确实不是很相关

不是很懂...帮顶

工作经验多放吧 也太不详细了...另外project 有点多 都PHD了...放相关课程感觉没啥必要...纯属个人意见