今天批final试卷的时候找老师看了一下statement of purpose,她的advice:
1. 少用passion,deep,extreme这种词,maybe you mean it,但是professor读的时候会觉得这些kids,too young too simple;. From 1point 3acres bbs
2. 尽量少的评价自己的work好不好,例如my performance is excellent,如果要评价的话也是由老师的推荐信评价;
3. 多写点自己的research,不要假设对方了解你的research,给足背景介绍what's going on,research is why they admit you;.google и
4. 真诚...