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【Resume_writer16】 改得完全没有逻辑和框架,不好别找!

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您使用的Editor名字: Resume_writer16
您使用的Editor链接: https://www.fiverr.com/resume_writer16
您使用了哪项服务?: 个人陈述 
您支付了多少美元?: 17
您对TA的服务评价分数(满分 5 分): ★☆☆☆☆(1 分)

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本帖最后由 地里的生活菌 于 2021-10-6 14:54 编辑

插入一句话总结:这个editor不好!别找!

1. 你使用的Editor名字或者链接
Resume_writer16
2. 你使用了哪项服务?
我改了RL
3. 你支付了多少美元?
17
4. 你对TA的服务评价如何?满分10分,你打几分?
1分,唯一一分给他主动要求cancel订单
改的 完全没有逻辑和框架 段中的论据不能支持论点 而且我有一大段他一个字都没给我动
5. 是否愿意把修改前后的文书贴出来,让大家参考一下?
附一段 大家品一品
She has impressed me with her analytical mind and artistic ability to comprehend, analyze, and assimilate various *** concepts. She is a quick learner. Her ability to grasp things conceptually and implement them practically is worth to take cognizance. These qualities would be worthwhile assets in her endeavor to pursue her program. A student with the desire to learn, and one who can inspire the tutor through her curiosity and eagerness- one certainly cannot be complacent when a student like *** is in class. And also, **** was only responsible for the searching paper, formatting references, and cleaning the data. When doing these basic tasks, she shows patience, practicality, and responsibility. No matter how simple and boring the work was, she can complete them with high quality. I believe her background and involvement in various projects and hardworking personality while in school proved her being a successful individual that sets goals and makes sure to achieve those.

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