【brookemorgan】 这个editor很好，PRO服务改的非常中肯，满分推荐！

一句话总结：这个editor很好，PRO服务改的非常中肯，满分推荐！


1. 你使用的Editor名字或者链接：brookemorgan
2. 你使用了哪项服务？
PRO Revision & Critique
3. 你支付了多少美元？
首单八折，总共136刀
4. 你对TA的服务评价如何？满分10分，你打几分？
10分，特意买了1天的delivery，改的非常中肯，我本来写了1100多字，直接给我改到900多字，而且意思基本没有变化，非常好
5. 是否愿意把修改前后的文书贴出来，让大家参考一下？
no，可以分享一下她的comments
Why limit yourself to mentioning only your undergraduate research here? There’s so much more to your background than that very first step! Here, I suggest providing a brief overview of your expertise that explains why you are a strong candidate for the MSCS program.

The weakest part of your personal statement is your explanation of why you’re pursuing a master’s at this point in time. What specific areas or skills do you lack expertise in? How will a master’s education move you forward on your desired career path? What are the most important things you hope to take away from this program? You discuss the strengths of the USC program in the next paragraph, so here you want to discuss your general, rather than school-specific, goals.