【致富手册】询问PS的主题 -- iq28慷慨分享09fall成功的ps!!

参考了……虽然明年才开始

转载自fudan bbs 精华区，我看了之后有点帮助，希望对大家有点作用吧

发信人: ydrah (aya~~~要努力了), 信区: GoAbroad
标  题: 昨天一个PI跟我说的关于ps...
发信站: 日月光华 (2004年11月10日11:47:15 星期三), 站内信件

可能是大家都知道的

不过还是贴上来 希望对各位xdjm有帮助
呵呵 顺便帮自己积攒一下rp  ^_^


I read the personal statement twice and felt that it needs to be revised
completely. Typically a statement includes several subsections. Firstly,
the applicants need to tell the admission committee what are their
long-term research interests and briefly, why. Then they should tell them
what efforts have they paid toward the goal. How prepared are they for the
graduate program. These could include course work, lab working experience
and their specific, unique life experience. The key is not to tell others
stuff that all applicants have done, such as the basic curriculum. But
unique aspects of this can be interesting. For example, they have done
particularly well in some or all courses. They have taken courses from
graduate school or from other fields. They have done experiments and gained
some solid lab experience. They are from particularly poor family or harsh
environment and succeeded, etc.



Committee members are also interested to know what applicants expect to
achieve in graduate school. What will be their long term career plan and
how the graduate training will facilitate their efforts.



It could be helpful for the applicants to identify some specific research
areas and potential PIs in their statement. However they should be careful
because it can backfire. The PI might not be in the search committee or not
powerful enough.



The statement you gave me needs to eliminate the first section about the
definition of “scientist”. It should also compress and refine his/her
description on the lab experience. It is great, but reads very redundant.
Lastly, I can sense the tone that the applicant “lectures” the admission
                                     ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
committee. This can be dangerous and annoying to read. The applicant should
~~~~~~~~~避免这个很重要 我觉得 :)
. check 1point3acres for more.also add stuff that I just described.


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56# dqq


非常感谢ls的分享，很受用啊。。这个主题帖真的是很好哦：）

顶啊，谢谢分享

在对每个学校都不太了解的情况下，每个PS还要写为什么选择这个学校。。。有好办法吗？

嗯嗯嗯~ 再看了一次IQ的PS和端木MM的推荐~

受不了了
一亩三分地能不能别出这么多精华帖
还让别的论坛活不

受不了了
一亩三分地能不能别出这么多精华帖
还让别的论坛活不
nooneknow 发表于 2009-11-3 02:42

thanks.
we are rising, but now taisha and gter are still much better than us.