推荐信求批！谢谢给大家加小小米！

我的推荐信草稿，不知道交给老师后会不会在有改动。先放上来，感谢大家的帮助！
To whom it may concern,

I am pleased to write this recommendation letter for XX XX. She was my student in Principle of Remote Sensing in the winter term of 2017, and she proved to be an excellent student. XX is extremely earnest about the coursework and managed to operate the ENVI skillfully after the practices. Her clearly-written practice reports demonstrate her solid professional theoretical knowledge, the attention to detail and the ability to think logically. With the conscientiousness, she scored in the top 10 percent on all the exams.

In the form of group-study, we always had discussions and seminars, and her teamwork ability never let me down. During the seminars, she and her team offered insightful and in-depth extra knowledge for classmates after looking for related information and integrating them into a seven-minute presentation. Once, before presenting in front of the class, she expressed her idea and confuse about a seminar consider, “the temperature change of black-body under sun” and we had a discussion about it. XX did well in filtering valid information and using them to support her thoughts. After that semester, I was happy to witness that she became more confident when presenting and more active in the classroom discussion.

Her interest in her major is displayed through her earnest attitude towards practice reports and her devotion in seminars. I believe that her strong academic abilities, deep passion for the geography, as well as the careful, realistic and responsible work attitude make her a strong candidate for the program. If there are questions I can answer, please feel free to contact me.

Sincerely,
XXX
Ph.D., University of XXX
Professor, XXX University

最后，真诚寻找推荐信CVPS互批，本人申请方向GEOGRAPHY/ GIS/ 遥感

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会不会太短了呢，278 words

总的来说还不错，可能有点偏general。比如第二段可以更specific一点，老师和你有了discussion，具体discuss了什么？老师从你的哪些观点中，看出了你在哪些方面的积累和储备？看出了你什么优点？
语言表达大体清晰，但还是建议找个native speaker润色一下，有些措辞可以更elegant一些，tone可以更sophisticated一些，我们自己写的读起来都容易有学生腔。
最后老师署名，我感觉很少会把自己的phd学校放在工作职位之前的，大部分也不会在署名上提自己的phd在哪儿拿的，有点weird

weibabybaby 发表于 2018-10-17 10:30
总的来说还不错，可能有点偏general。比如第二段可以更specific一点，老师和你有了discussion，具体discuss ...

最后那个署名是我去别的地方复制的/捂脸

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谢谢你！

补充内容 (2018-10-17 11:39):
谢谢你啦！

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跟这个老师交流并不是很多，仅限于小班课14个人，有点互动。不敢写的太过分哈哈哈，因为还要交给老师改，所以在specify的时候很苦恼TT

During the seminars, Xinyi and her team made insightful contribution in offering in-depth extra knowledge to classmates. She did well in filtering valid information and her PPT were always clear and concise. She knew exactly how to attract and reach audiences with the simple PPT and the informative oral narrative. Also, she would always go beyond the seminar topics. Once she took her own practice experience about how to read HDF5 with ENVI as example when their topic is to introduce the HDF5 format, and another time, when the topic was Radiation calibration field, she shared tips about where and how to obtain the calibration coefficient, which impressed me. After that semester, I was happy to witness that she became more confident when expressing her ideas and more active in the classroom discussion.

第二段重新写了一遍，找了新的佐证，删掉了一些

During the seminars, Xinyi led her team to come up with critical in-depth extra knowledge to classmates. She did well in filtering valid information (from XX丢点数字进来) and showcased her advice using vivid and clear presentations. She knew exactly how to attract and reach audiences by telling a story using complicated data sources, making her recommendations informative oral narrative. In addition, she would always go beyond the seminar topics. 【Once she took her own practice experience about how to read HDF5 with ENVI as example when their topic is to introduce the HDF5 format, and another time, when the topic was Radiation calibration field, she shared tips about where and how to obtain the calibration coefficient, which impressed me. 】（我觉得这一段写的不够好，可能需要细化一下或者改进一下怎么样可以具体一些）After spending a semester with her, I am confident that she would be a unique student for your program.

以上都是个人意见哈~供你参考~祝你申请顺利

lwang336 发表于 2018-10-18 05:42
During the seminars, Xinyi led her team to come up with critical in-depth extra knowledge to classma ...

哇！蟹蟹蟹蟹！我现在才看到！给你家米，再一次感谢！