Resume Editing Post - Offering help to those needed

Hi guys and dolls,

As you might have seen my long commenting posts in this-> https://www.1point3acres.com/bbs/thread-577829-1-1.html and this-> https://www.1point3acres.com/bbs/thread-577829-1-1.html
I really enjoy reading and editing resumes, and WILL give long and harsh comments.
Now I've reached a point that I decided to make this post and benefit more peers still struggling inside the deep pool.
I understand the road to success is dark and frustrating, and I wish I could be of help.

Please do understand that I do not know every aspect of software engineer/machine learning engineer, so some projects I might not be able to give specific comment on, unless you give extra explanation beforehand.

Please follow the rules:
1. Please reply and post your google doc public view link, do not mask any project names, but do delete your own contact info(do not simply just mask it, actually go into resume and delete it).  if you have a specific deadline you want to meet, include that in your post. otherwise, patience is my advice.
2. I will reply in this public post, so your peers can read and benefit too.
3. if you find my comments harsh and grammartically incorrect, please do ignore, i claim no responsibility...
4. Last but most important, PLEASE EDIT after you read my comments and show me your PROGRESS, I require at least 1 iteration, so please post again after you've edited. I can't track you down or anything, but please know it's for your own benefit.

Thank you in advance for your kindly help.

I'm applying for grad school in US, including InfoSystem/InfoManagement/CS/DS/BusinessAnalytics/OperationResearch programs, looking forward to pursuing a data analyst position after graduation.

Planning to delete something on my resume so that it could fit in 1 page.

resume link : https://drive.google.com/file/d/ ... VM/view?usp=sharing

Hello Yanhe, thank you for offering us such a great help. Here attached is the google doc link of my resume: https://docs.google.com/document ... FzOHD7ixa-_c/edit#. My deadline is January 15, but do take your time if you are busy with your own work. If you have any question feel free to let me know. My Wechat ID is 15058866459.