我在这里贴出一些我们沟通的片段供大家参考,一方面展示一下她的态度,另一方面也可为大家写CV的时候提供一些帮助:
Catherine: You'll see that I have made some general edits such as changing some verbs in your bullet points, quantifying some of your work and expanding on accomplishments. I've made edits to reduce it to within one page also. Different versions of Word can sometimes change the layout and extend it to above one page, so please do let me know if this happens and I will reduce it again.
Me: Could you please clarify the reason why you delete some experiences?
Especially TA and reviewer. I think these experiences can show my social responsibility.
Catherine: Yes no problem. This is because none of them were expanded on and provided any bullet points of what you did. As you had expanded on the other experiences it showed that those were the most important experiences
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Me: I find it hard to clarify the detail clearly within three bullets... In a CV, are the achievements more important than the process?
Catherine: Not always. I think stick to explaining the process clearly in this case as you have other accomplishments in the CV
Me: we also do ..., but the bullets do not show that. does it matter?
Catherine: No, I don’t think that matters. You don’t need to include every detail on the CV, an overview will suffice, so I don’t think it’s necessary to include it.