CS MS PS第一版求猛拍~

第一版PS感觉简直不能看啊。把标题写在页眉里面好吗？内容求大神们猛拍啊~

zj45499 发表于 2016-11-14 10:42
First of, Age of Empires is not "real time".
And tldr

Age of Empires is a series of personal computer games developed by Ensemble Studios (defunct in 2009) and published by Microsoft Studios. The first title of the series was Age of Empires, released in 1997. Since then, seven titles and three spin-offs have been released. The titles are historical real-time strategy games, and their gameplay revolves around two main game modes: Single player and campaign. They competed with another popular strategy series, Civilization, and are set amidst historical events.  这是维基百科上面的

woyuxuxu123 发表于 2016-11-14 10:57
Age of Empires is a series of personal computer games developed by Ensemble Studios (defunct in 20 ...

ok         

zj45499 发表于 2016-11-14 13:28
way too long.
shrink to one page.
font is too small.

字体我用的times 12号的，转成pdf就不小了。内容方面有什么建议吗~

First of, Age of Empires is not "real time".
And tldr

zj45499 发表于 2016-11-14 12:34
ok

请问还有什么建议吗，麻烦指点一下~

woyuxuxu123 发表于 2016-11-14 13:06
请问还有什么建议吗，麻烦指点一下~

way too long.
shrink to one page.
font is too small.

我是北理计院的……围观楼主

先把语法写对

woyuxuxu123 发表于 2016-11-14 14:30
字体我用的times 12号的，转成pdf就不小了。内容方面有什么建议吗~

建议就是太长了......
内容写得再好 也太长了