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[申请文书] 分享一个印度CS的SOP

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本帖最后由 tiger 于 2012-11-20 20:59 编辑

注:这个PS(SOP)个人觉得写得很好。至少完全符合personal + persuasive。可以好好借鉴的。

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很励志的故事。这个人是印度理工的(比MIT还难进的那个),后来成功申请到了rice,读了硕士和博士后在bay area工作了。可以看看他的汽车的变化轨迹:
1st: mazda mx-3
http://monarch.cs.rice.edu/~santa/pics/santa/mazda.jpg. Waral dи,
2nd: BMW M-3
http://monarch.cs.rice.edu/~santa/pics/santa/santabmw.jpg
. Waral dи,now: Merc slk 230. Χ
http://monarch.cs.rice.edu/~santa/pics/slk-route1-big.jpg这个故事告诉我们要好好写ps。


STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
I am a senior year student in Computer Science and Engineering at the Indian Institute of Technology (IIT), Kharagpur, India graduating withB.Tech (Hons.) in June 2000.  The background preparation I have made, my research interests, and career goals are enlisted in the sections that follow.
I Background preparation
I grew up in the academic environment of IIT Kharagpur since childhood. I got exposed to research and technology from an early age as my father was a professor in the Computer Science and Engineering Department of IIT Kharagpur. Throughout my school career, I consistently maintained excellent academic records. This got reflected in my receiving the prestigious scholarships at the end of my high-school career and in freshman year at IIT. I received the most prestigious Jagadish Bose National Science Talent Search (JBNSTS) scholarship awarded to only the exceptionally bright students, selected through rigorous multiple phase examinations of innovative problem solving. I also received the National Talent Search Examination (NTSE) scholarship awarded on a whole India basis. I was selected to represent my state in the Indian National Mathematics Olympiad conducted by National Board of Higher Mathematics. The internationally famous Statistical and Mathematical Institute, Indian Statistical Institute (ISI) selected me for undergraduate study with scholarship. However, my background motivated me to study the field of Computer Science and Engineering that interested me since my childhood.

On joining Computer Science and Engineering Department of IIT, I concentrated on acquiring knowledge not only through the classroom teaching materials, but also through the volume of Computers related materials in our house. In the process I have acquired in-depth knowledge in the fields of Computer Organization and Architecture, Operating Systems, Design and Analysis of Algorithm, Parallel Processing and Distributed Systems. I was also fascinated with the growth of Networking and Communications. In my junior year, I undertook the challenging assignment of making a network topology with microprocessors employing token-ring concept. I built an optimizing compiler for a subset of C – one of the most challenging and satisfying tasks I undertook - and for quite some time used my own compiler in compiling all my programs. The Operating systems lab and Networks lab unleashed my creative juices and I spent many happy hours going far beyond the class assignments, also getting the top grade in these subjects.
. Waral dи,
The Internet revolution motivated me and I took formal and informal project works in the field of Networking and Distributed Systems. Even though I have gathered excellent knowledge in these fields, at times I neglected studies on day to day mundane class materials. As a result, I had to pay a price in terms of my grades, which are lower than the top group of students I belong to. However, I have enough of self-confidence to make it up and produce best grades in the fields I am interested in. Apart from academics, I excelled in extra-curricular activities too, leading my hall teams in soccer, aquatics, chess and quizzing in University competitions. -baidu 1point3acres

With this background preparation I have substantially gained in one area – I have acquired sufficient knowledge in the field of my future research direction. To strengthen my background I undertook my final research project in these areas. As a student member of IEEE, I keep myself abreast with the current developments in the field through the IEEE/ACM Transactions on Networking.
II My Research Interest
On completing my junior year, during the summer months of 1999 I undertook a research work in the Internet area. The Internet has brought phenomenal changes in the society in terms of bringing people from different geographical locations closer. High-speed transmission of images and video telephony will take it a step further for online interaction. So I concentrated in building a system to realize this goal. I came out with a scheme that was submitted in the[size=+1] [size=+0]IEEE sponsored International VLSI Design conferencescheduled in January 2000 in India. The paper has been acceptedforpresentation in the conference. The conference proceedings will be published byIEEE computer Society Press. I have also received a fellowship to present the paper in this conference. The proposed scheme can be applied for video telephony.

The Internet has also brought in significant interest in Network Computing and Distributed Systems. So as I moved to my senior year I decided to do my project work in this field. As the hardware circuit speed is reaching a plateau, the demand of higher range of computing power can be only met through parallel and distributed computing environment. Execution of applications through proper distribution of computing tasks is a prerequisite to gain high throughput. At the same time, there exists a limitation of bandwidth for any real life applications. So, there is a need for caching frequently used computing tasks in the local memory of a CPU. Though in last two decades the cache concept has been studied in detail for a single processor environment, it’s behavior with respect to a distributed environment is an open problem. In my undergraduate project I have been building and enhancing the cache performance that would lead to higher throughput for a distributed system. I have designed a cache simulator for any generic distributed environment. . check 1point3acres for more.
Further, availability of Internet and Java based computing have added a new dimension to distributed processing paradigm. In this background, the second major problem I have been working on matching the computing requirement of an application with the available bandwidth of the communication link and computing power of different processing nodes of a distributed computing environment. . From 1point 3acres bbs

The Internet was not build with security in mind. Now with the world turning to electronic exchange of information (for example e-commerce) in a big way, network security has become a point of major concern. I presented a well-received seminar on "Network Security & Authentication" at IIT Kharagpur; in the process I got a wide exposure in this challenging field getting an "Ex" grade in the seminar presentation.
III My Career Goals
In the beginning of my senior year, I got a job offer from Texas Instruments though campus interviews – one of the most prestigious jobs available in India. However, my career goals have led me to draw the following conclusion – it is necessary for me to get a better exposure in the field of my choice through higher studies and research.

I intend to master the current networking concepts in the rich and flexible environment of a top university in US. This environment, I have concluded, will be ideally suited to realize my goals. I am greatly impressed with the high quality of research being done on Networks and Distributed systems there. I would love to enrich myself in the graduate program, and ultimately make a meaningful contribution in the ever-growing field of Computer Networks by joining some research group. In the process I am confident of contributing significantly in the research efforts of the department.

My long-term goal is to put my footprints in the field of network based computing environment through contribution of original ideas and translating those ideas to end applications and products. In this endeavor, I want to contribute significantly to the human society.
Santashil Pal Chaudhuri




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拼音 2012-11-19 20:07:05 | 只看该作者
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我会说IIT的sop都常年模板么?!
原来室友小印是iit的,我要申请的时候,问他给点sop意见呗..这货直接找出移动硬盘,里面一个文件夹是各种专业分类的sop...........-baidu 1point3acres
给印度人团结的精神跪了。。
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Tara 2012-11-19 19:54:53 | 只看该作者
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好东西,正惆怅career goal 呢。。。。
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 楼主| tiger 2012-11-19 19:56:12 | 只看该作者
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Tara 发表于 2012-11-19 19:54
好东西,正惆怅career goal 呢。。。。

这个SOP感觉写得挺好的啊  可以借鉴下
尤其是硕士啊  似乎更看重的就是你的long term goal 及 这个学校的这个program是否符合你的goal
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 楼主| tiger 2012-11-19 20:14:45 | 只看该作者
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拼音 发表于 2012-11-19 20:07
我会说IIT的sop都常年模板么?!
原来室友小印是iit的,我要申请的时候,问他给点sop意见呗..这货直接找出 ...

这。。。
不过早有耳闻印度人的团结了
听说在硅谷搞IT的一个印度人会带来一帮印度人,而中国人则不会,这也造成了中层的印度人远多于中国人。。。

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拼音 2012-11-19 20:20:51 | 只看该作者
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tiger 发表于 2012-11-19 03:14 . Χ
这。。。
不过早有耳闻印度人的团结了
. 听说在硅谷搞IT的一个印度人会带来一帮印度人,而中国人则不会, ...

我也发现了....
三哥真心很团结
学校里感觉一个印度人找到工作,以后系里每年找到那份工作的全是印度人...
我跟找到工作的天朝学姐发message,求refer或者找工作的建议, 完全都不会回我的..............
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 楼主| tiger 2012-11-19 20:22:00 | 只看该作者
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拼音 发表于 2012-11-19 20:20
. .и我也发现了....
三哥真心很团结
学校里感觉一个印度人找到工作,以后系里每年找到那份工作的全是印度人 ...
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你应该找学长。。。
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拼音 2012-11-19 20:27:56 | 只看该作者
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tiger 发表于 2012-11-19 03:22
你应该找学长。。。

学长都找不到工作做phd/postdoc了..囧
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nooneknow 2012-11-20 03:39:59 | 只看该作者
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整体非常清晰。算中等偏上的ps吧。实际上废话稍多了一点。

教授的角度看,research interests是首先要看的。很可能都是直接跳过去看。而且希望第一句话就是interests是什么。
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RosieC 2016-8-19 02:05:33 | 只看该作者
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前来拜读阿三的文
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