他要求我通过个人邮件联系,没毛病。
我看过他家的房子,从图片上来看,是既近又方便,真是好啊。大家不要说我贪图便宜,谁不想租的便宜些呢?
就这样,这个自称威廉的人开始了他的表演。
Thanks for the interest in my apartment, I'm happy to inform you that the apartment is available for long term & short term lease is also acceptable. My name is William Ueda. I'm a missionary, I got transferred to Nebraska, to serve God and humanity. I work with SOS Children's Healthcare here in Nebraska. I have no choice than to relocate and this is the reason why I want to rent out the units to someone who is going to take care of the place as if they own it. I will be here for long that is why am looking for a clean and responsible person to live in my apartment and also when i get back from my trip in the next Two Years, So i was advised to rent out the place because there is no one leaving there right now!! The apartment is located: 101 Albacore Ln, Foster City, CA 94404
The rent includes all utilities and close to all amenities. The place is available for immediate move in. We left behind some Facilities and electronics which include the rent: Its a spacious and lovely 1-bedroom fully furnished apartment with utilities included. The kitchen is well equipped.Utilities and Equipments: Kitchen well equipped(microwave oven, Dish washer, blender, Cocktail mixer, Sandwich maker, stove e.t.c), all utilities included such as Internet facilities,Parking space, e.t.c Rental fees : $950 Per month including utilities Damage deposit : $950 Refundable
The rent is made very affordable because I am seriously looking for a clean and reliable person to take care of the apartment. I am not after the money, what I am after is the welfare of my apartment. I will like you to drive by to the address today to view the exterior of the building for you to get a better view of the building and also see what the neighborhood looks like and get back to me so that I can forward you the full interior pictures to you to have an idea how beautiful and spacious the inside looks and we can proceed to the application form because you cannot go inside, the apartment is locked and i have the keys here with me in Nebraska
I look forward to hearing from you
Regards
-baidu 1point3acres
看到了吧,这简直就是骗子邮件的模板!第一段,开宗明义,讲明自己的情况:我是一个教徒,帮助儿童在其他的州,只求找一个真正爱护房子的人。租期长短皆可。第二段:具体介绍房子的情况, 总之是装备齐全价格公道。第三段:合情合理,说明现实的困难,不能够当面交房。
如果不是最后被骗,我觉得这文案可以作为中学生邮件作文的模板。我就想问我怎么能拒绝这样一个人租房子给我!肯定是上帝在保佑我。
于是我快速的回复给他,敲定了要他的房子,但是我的疑虑并没有打消,毕竟我是一个见过市面的人, 即使不能面见,也得不见兔子不撒鹰。但是和前面的房东说不要他的房子了。
Thanks for getting back to me, I want you to now that i will be shipping you the keys through DHL courier service after processing your application form. Attached are the interior pictures for you to have an idea how beautiful and spacious the inside looks, I will like you to get back to me with your final decision after viewing the interior pictures, So if you are interested in proceeding with the rental application. Below is the application form for you to fill out and get back to me so that we can proceed to the next step.
Willian开始加码,他准备用DHL将钥匙和申请资料给我邮过来,并且让我填写申请书,真的是很正规。
*******RENT APPLICATION FORM******* (Private & Confidential) Also, Please let me get these answers. FIRST NAME:__________ MIDDLE NAME:__________ LAST NAME:__________ (CELL)PHONE__________ (HOME)PHONE__________ KIDS _____ (YES/NO), HOW MANY ________ PRESENT ADDRESS: _____________________ CITY: _______________ STATE:______________ ZIP CODE: ____________ DRIVERS LICENSE______ ? WHEN DO YOU INTEND MOVING IN? ______________ HOW LONG DO YOU INTEND STAYING? ____________ HOW MANY MONTH RENT ARE YOU WILLING TO PAY UPFRONT_________ DO YOU HAVE PET _________ KIND OF PETS: _____________ HABITS DO YOU SMOKE ______________ DO YOU DRINK ______________ I ______CERTIFY that answers given herein are true and complete to the best of my knowledge. I authorize investigation of all statements contained in this application for tenant screening as may be necessary in arriving at a tenant decision. I understand that the landlord may terminate any rental agreement entered into for any misrepresentation made above. I want you to make sure the present address is not mistaken because that's where the keys and documents will be ship to. Please all this transaction is based on Trust & Honesty and again I want you to stick to your words,I am putting everything into Gods hand, So please do not let me down in this property of mine and God bless you more as you do this..1point3acres
我们相信上帝,哎,都怪我没见识,被这种鬼话给骗了。
最后结果,我毫无意外的幸运的获得了入住的机会:
Congratulations!!! Your application form as been approved. I really appreciate your willingness in renting my place and i promise you that you will never regret taking my place. I have taken time to go over your application form and i am so impressed and can't stop having the feeling that my place will be well kept by you as promised, and more so something came to my mind and i felt it'll be better to discuss it with you. Well i'm sure i'll have you wondering what it is.. Anyways its not something scary or that serious, i just wanted to know if you could provide me with one or a couple of your picture so as for me to have an idea who my new tenant is and how you look like (no offense). I'm willing to keep this as a means of recognition pending the time we'll meet as this will even make it easier for me to quickly identify you by the time i come for a visit in the nearest future.
The total cost for you to move into the apartment is $1,900. $950 for rent and $950 for the damage deposit which is refundable at the end of the lease if nothing is damaged in the apartment. So i want you to know that we only request for the security deposit which is $950 only for me to ship the keys and documents to you first and when you receive the keys and ready to move in. Then you can make the first month rent. I would be sending the apartment key's and documents to you via EXPRESS SERVICE to the address you filled in the application form and the shipment tracking number will be emailed to you so that you can track it to know the exact time the package will be delivered to you the next day.. Below are the document I will be shipping to you once i have received the payment from you. I will like you to make the payment to my wife information below.
Here are the contents of the document. .--
1)Entrance and The Rooms Keys
2)The Apartment Documentary File.
3)Payment Receipt.
4)A Copy Of The Lease Agreement Form I will like you to go ahead and send the payment to my wife Information.