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端木姐 麻烦你了哈！
Thanks in advance!
ps:这个贴让我震撼了！端木姐居然改到500楼啦！

端木姐，这个按照你说的做了相应的修改，你再给我看看问题吧

冒一下泡。。。这周作业比较难 ><
明天交完作业应该能有时间过来完成任务

预告：
我12月14号考完期末，在那之前应该会比较忙，成绩不能太难看啊～
很可能无法及时回复，希望同学们理解
BEST WISHES~

同update。老板感恩节前一个proposal deadline，另一门seminar周三要交一个巨长的report。大家请耐心……我感恩节来这个帖子～～～

认真研究下~~~

502# lsh_891023
This version looks very nice :)

But the font types are still not consistent.

"Software Institution"
is this the official translation? If not, I think "college" or "school" is more common.

Address:
No. 22  Hankou St.


Experience:
Add month to the dates

Best wishes~

507# 高晟
Since you're using DOC, the format is off using either MS Word or TextEdit on Mac. I have no idea what your original format is. (Why couldn't MS make Word perform consistently cross platforms?! What's wrong with the developing team???)

Anyway, I will make comments as much as I can. Due to the uncertainty of the look of DOC, I may miss some formatting issues.

• For each section title, there should be no bullet points in front of it.
• Add zip code to your address
• Add Jilin to each address
• Most people use "GPA" and "Major GPA"
• Add location to your research experience
• In the section of research experience, the font size is not consistent. I have no idea if it is because of the shitty performance of MS Word or it is in your original resume.
• the sentences in the experience description are not the ones typical for resume. For instance, "Gainedknowledge in Back-Propagation Neural Networks and Fuzzy Mathematics", resume is about what you have accomplished, not what you learned from this project. Try rewording. It should help to read more samples.
• use "and" instead of "&"
• "OutstandingStudent" is enough, no need to add "honor of". the other two are the same.

Best wishes~

508# gerdi
1. yes, "concentration" is the typical word here
2. I think your resume looks impressive. You have done a lot :)
For each experience, your description is concise and clear. I like this style.
Especially, you use concrete numbers to show your accomplishment, e.g., "Designed and executed the process of arrivals and departures of 85 athletes from 29 countries."
I also like this one: "Expanded the scale and influence of the game with the involvement of 96 players, which is 3 times more than the first one"
Well done!

At the bottom of the first page:
"Analyzed data of 207 Olympic volunteers from Management School by using SPSS"
delete "by"
maybe you can say a little bit more on the data you analyzed, such as which type of data


Wish you all the best ^^

510# tsong1234

• add zip code to your address
• delete "Undergraduate"
• for common format of education, please see samples mentioned in #1 post of this thread
• No period after "present"
• "relevant courses"
• I don't think two pages are necessary here. You can rearrange the sections and make it just one page. For instance, your skills can be header plus two lines.
• use "and" instead of "&"
• Why "Successful Participants"? It looks odd to me.
• I have to look up "cadre".... orz Is there any other common word for "cadre"?
• 2007&2008&2009 --> 2007, 2008, 2009 OR 2007 - 2009
• "XYZ of B##U." --> XYZ, B##U (no period at the end)
• "Teaching assistant" is not "social activity"
• You need to change the section title of "social activities" and also categorize your experience properly. "Vice-president" can be under section "Affiliation." Although a lot of people use "Extracurricular activity," I'm not a big fan of it.
• STANDARD TESTS --> Standardized test (Zach has corrected it for a million of times....)

Best wishes~