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其实第一次备考的时候对写作还挺有信心的，只准备了一下大作文就上考场了，结果很惨痛。。。。
第二次认认真真准备小作文大作文，小作文写了大概十篇，大作文每种类型都写了两篇以上。最后看到6.5虽然不是特别高，但也挺开心的了。所以跟大家分享一下。-baidu 1point3acres
资料：
什么顾家北慎小嶷都不用，只管用好simon网站上的满分范文，网站排版分类啥的有些乱，我都整理在了word里，放在下面了，有需要可以下载。
小作文：. 1point 3 acres
我把小作文的类型分了四类，第一类静态图，第二类动态图，也就是涉及时间线的，第三类多图题，指的是涉及两个、三个图的情况，因为在段落布局上跟前两类有所不同，特意摘出来练，第四类是地图题和流程图。. check 1point3acres for more.
simon建议的段落布局跟常见的有点不一样，常见的是开头段，中间两段详写，最后是结尾总结。simon式布局是开头段，第二段总结，三四段详写。下面是我自己写的一篇练习。
题目：The bar chartbelow shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groupswho did regular physical activity in 2010.
[/b] 我的练习：
The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian people doingregular physical exercise in terms of age groups by gender in 2010.（一句） Overall, the percentage of women who often did regular physicalactivities was larger than the figure for men in Australia in 2010. And peopleaged between 15 and 24 were more likely to engage in regular physicalactivities than any other age groups.（两句，第一句写总体情况，第二句写重点类，即辅导教材里经常提到的占比最大的，数量最多的等） Looking at the youngest group first, the majority of Australianmen aged between 15 and 24 did regular physical activities, at 52.8%, while thefigure for women was 47.7%. Every 10-year age bracket from this to 44 containedan increasingly less proportion of men engaging in regular physical exercise, reducingto 39.5%.（两到三句） By contrast, thepercentage of women aged from 15 to 54 doing regular physical exercise wascontinually rising to 53.5%. When people got older above 55, the proportion ofwomen doing regular physical activities was slightly decreasing, while thefigure for men was marginally growing. （两到三句）（162 words）
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我一共练习了25篇，涉及每个类型，题目都是剑5-剑12的原题。也在下面的word里了。
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大作文：
[b]40分钟，250字，10min构思，共13句，开头段两句，中间两段，每段5句（甚至4句），这样保证写出来的句子不会太低级零散，末尾段一句
. .и共有四个类型：
1Opinion, 2discussion（题目中会有两方面的意见，且明确让你discuss）,3 problem / solution,4 two-part question
其中opinion类又分为四种写作方法： Completely agree
1. Introduce the topic, then state astrong opinion (e.g. I completely agree)
2. Main paragraph: explain one reason for your opinion
3. Main paragraph: explain another reason for your opinion
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your view completely disagree 1. Introduce the topic, then state astrong opinion (e.g. I completely agree).--
2. Main paragraph: explain your opinion
3. Main paragraph: explain why you think the opposite view iswrong. .и
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarize your view Balanced opinion1. Introduce the topic, then explain thatyou have a balanced view
2. Main paragraph: explain your views on one side of theargument
3. Main paragraph: explain why you also recognise the oppositeview.
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your views Almost balancedopinion, but favouring one side1. Introduce the topic, then use a"while" sentence (while I accept A, I believe B)
2. Main paragraph: explain why you accept one side of theargument.1point3acres
3. Main paragraph: but explain why you still favour theopposite view
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your views
我的练习： 1（opinion类型） Pollutionand other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing andbecoming richer, so some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do youagree or disagree?
Somepeople think environmental problems are undoubtedly associated with theeconomic development. I completely disagree with this view, because somepollution is not due the development of economy, and there are some measurescan be taken to improve economy without environmental problems. Thereare so many environmental problems which are caused by bad individual habitsinstead of improvement for economy. Firstly, due to the fall in the fee of airtravel, more and more people prefer traveling by airplane, although some traintravel is available and nearly take the same time as air travel. The carbondioxide emissions produced by airplane will lead to heavy air pollution likegreenhouse effect, however, almost no development of economy will be brought about.Secondly, the recycling rates in some countries are very low, and waste, whichis not divided correctly, can’t be processed efficiently and produce pollutionto soil, water and other resources. Furthermore, it may need more money tomanage the pollution. Inmy opinion, various actions can be taken to promote economic developmentwithout environmental problems. Firstly, governments should introduceregulations to force individuals to separate their waste, which is beneficialto protect the environment. For example, some high-developed countries, likeSweden, have established relevant system to recycle waste effectively, and itdoesn’t have any negative effect on their economy. Secondly, more and moreindustrialized countries tend to pay more attention to technology industry,which is more environmentally and friendly and can contribute a lot to economy.For example, successful technology company, like Google, nearly produces nowaste and pollution, but significantly has stimulate the economy in the USA andeven the world.
Inconclusion, there is no need to sacrifice environment for the development ofeconomy.（286words）
大作文的练习题目都是8月份的真题预测的题目，word中标号1,2,3,4分别是opinion,discuss, problem / solution, two-part question
这次准备作文，感觉有点入门了，写作文也不再像酷刑了，核心还是少想多练。 中间做了一次大作文批改，淘宝上找的，效果还可以，是个工作室，有想知道的童靴可以私信我哈~
可能因为task1的里面图太多太大，只能拆成好几个传上来了【捂脸】
. 1point 3 acres
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