请问各位前辈master的study plan怎么改

各位前辈好！本人2019 Fall Master Science, Artificial Intelligence. 就读于乔治亚大学(UGA, University of Georgia)
专业是毫无疑问的敏感专业...
请问各位前辈有没有改进的意见！还需要加哪些内容或者删减哪些内容。
谢谢各位前辈！
Research Area of Interest and Major：
Major: Artificial Intelligence
Research Area of Interest: Combination of A.I. and daily stuff to improve our life quality
About: At first, I will learn fundamental courses as quickly as possible to understand the common points among different A.I. Perspectives. In my first semester, I will learn Deductive Systems, Data Mining, Machine Learning, Artificial Intelligence and Research Seminar in specific.
Then, I will participate in various student labs finding opportunities to apply my ideas on practical issues, improve my understanding of the common points. And find the most suitable mentor to start and complete my dissertation.
After graduation: Because of the market, I will return to China and start my own business, launching more intelligence gadgets which could spice up people’s daily life.

Advisor or Potential Advisor:
I hope that Dr. In Kee Kim and Dr. Khaled Rasheed will be my two thesis advisors in the future.

Is your program coursework only? If not, please tell us the name of your research project and give a basic description of your research.
My degree requires me a piece of thesis, but the topic will be decided when I get to my university and discuss with my potential advisors.

Research Funding: (Where is the funding coming from?)
None

Practical Application of Research:
Using Artificial Intelligence to help people learn musical instruments.
Using Artificial Intelligence to correct wrong movements in bodybuilding.
Using Artificial Intelligence to recommend the most seasonal and healthy salad recipe.