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开头段
开头段=背景描述+引入话题+我的观点

🔥背景描述：放大时间的描述背景，以下9点中任意选一个。
(1) Nowadays, with the rapid development of the modern society, the competition is getting increasingly fierce/jobs are becoming more and more demanding in the competitive world/ university obtain the capacity to build up more dormitories for all students
(2) In the contemporary world, facing the overwhelming new sources,
(3) With the growing trend of studying abroad and attending exchange programs. Nowadays, it is possible for determined students to have a chance to experience exotic culture and acquire advanced knowledge and interact with the best professor in the Ivy League Universities.
(4) The fast pace of modern life in metropolis
(5) The rapid development of modern industrialization
(6) Over rapid urban development
(7) With further progress of economic globalization
(8) As known to all, in the contemporary world, intensive competitions and overwhelming workload cause harms to people from all ages.
(9) As known to all, so as to survive in the contemporary world, everyone has to confront fierce competitions from every aspect of their life.

🔥引入话题：改写题目，抛出题目的观点
(1) The general public hold the opinion that…
(2) With many people taking the attitudes that…, while others believe that

🔥我的观点：表达自己观点
(1) However, as far as I am concerned /from my own perspective,
(2) It seems logical at the first glance, but more situations should be taken into account. / The issue concerning … become more debating and attracting. /
(3) A is not so harmful as most people concerned
(4) Not only should people do A, but also should do B
(5) A is as essential as B, and it deserves equal attention.

🔥中间段
中间段=每段观点句+解释细节+假设/结果/例子/反面论证+因此

🔥中间段1
(1)        First and foremost, there is every reason to believe/ there is no substitute for …, for the reason that it constitutes indispensable benefits to
(2)        By which I mean
(3)        To illustrate,
(4)        If/suppose
(5)        As a result,
(6)        Thus, it is imperative for us to

🔥中间段2
(1)        In addition, view from a certain angle, … exerts positive effects on/ plays an essential role in
(2)        Because
(3)        To be more specific, in most cases
(4)        Without it
(5)        For example
(6)        There is a hidden possibility that
(7)        Therefore, is beneficial to

🔥中间段3:让步段
(1)        Last but not least, admittedly, it is true that
(2)        To illustrate, on no account should we ignore the significance of
(3)        Nevertheless,
(4)        It is … that
(5)        Hence, is meaningful to

🔥其他句子
A survey conducted by a prestigious university,
.1point3acresAs an old saying goes,  
There is a common notion claims that

🔥结尾段
最后有时间就总结下所有观点
(1)        To sum up, based on the reasons listed above…. Not only will, but it also…
(2)        Thus, we are encouraged to …
(3)        Only by…, can we…

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雅思可可以通用吗

這是for 學術寫作的模板？

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林威廉 发表于 2023-9-22 20:34
這是for 學術寫作的模板？

感觉是独立写作？学术写作不是只有100多字嘛