托福三次考试作文27-27-28模板分享

鉴于好多童鞋问我要作文模版。我总结的也比较普通，给大家个参考吧。

综合写作我觉得拿分要点还是在听力部分，但是听力sec部分比口语和写作sec部分的听力难多了，所以我之前写过的一个帖子分享了自己练习听力的方法，传送门 http://www.1point3acres.com/bbs/thread-107639-1-1.html

模版如下：

“反对”

The lecture refutes the points illustrated in the reading material.
In accordance with the listening, the professor/lecturer claims/draws the conclusion that …
On the contrary, the reading contends an opposite standing that …
The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that …, which differs from the statement in the reading material that …
Another evidence the speaker adopts to contradict the passage is that … However, the reading states that …
The additional discussion focuses on … The lecturer maintains that …, which poses challenge to the assumption of the reading that …
In conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading.

“赞成”

The lecture reinforces the points illustrated in the reading material.
In accordance with the listening, the professor claims that ..., meanwhile, the reading contends a similar standing that …
The first point the professor uses to solidify the reading is that …, which is almost same as the statement in the reading material that …
Another evidence the speaker adopts to bolster the passage is that …, likewise, the reading states that …
The additional discussion focuses on …. The speaker maintains that …, and the reading holds that …
In conclusion, the point made in the lecture gives a boost to what is presented in the reading.

独立写作，可能三站一共加起来也就练习了三篇。我觉得模版算是起到了一个很重要的作用吧，分享给大家，基本上适用于所有题目。

以下是“自己总结”的模版，我每次独立写作都会把字数写到500字以上，考试时我会根据题目对模板进行小幅度的更改，不过影响不大。对于题目进行的展开用到了自己的GRE词汇，所以大家根据自己情况来调整喽~

P.S. 因为这份模板已经给很多童鞋发过了，如果原封不动的照搬可能会被ETS判为雷同，所以拿来主义的筒子们谨慎~
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Under many circumstances, the issue of X is much concerned to a point
where a wide discussion has been aroused. One conventional notion is
that ... After a closer scrutiny into all the factors that matter, on large scale,
I would frown on this claim and reckon that it fails to be representative.
  Initially, I have to concede that X is somewhat beneficial/ indispensable.
For one thing, X, on some occasions, it serves as ... which contributes to ... For the other,
it is relatively effective ...
  Nevertheless, the rationality of the claim is largely undermined by
the oversimplification it suffers from. As is often the case, X is acknowledged as a controversial
existence whose definition involves a combination of efforts on both internal and external
layers and differs among people varying in personalities as well as values.
Even the objective layers bear the possibilities of driving the results
to other paths. In this sense, it is kind of absurdity to define ... by
highlighting ... With reference for the survey by International ...,60%
of the respondents between 16 and 89 in E.U. claimed that ... is the
last choice and 70% of whom believed that ...The case concerning ...
serves as an evidence which can largely consolidate my claim that... X is
tantamount to opening Pandora Box.
  What is more, the validation of the view presented in this topic is
not universally self-evident. On the condition that the concepts closely
related, this proposal has been proved to be effective in... and any
other possibilities or efforts have been proved to be vain attempts and
X has won over the widest range of acknowledgement, the significance is
Supposed to be attached to
X. Whereas when these prerequisites remove, it would be another story.
  At last, the consequences of highlighting ... rather than that of ...
is expected to bring about turn out to be destructive. One point that is
worth of mentioning is that the negative influence will be infectious
which can inevitably endanger the individual and the whole. In addition,
the potential confusions and misleading incur far outweigh the expected
benefits and opportunities it can offer. To be exact, it is tantamount to
the act of trading the possibility of sustainable development for the
reality of the present interests. Even worse, the assumption is acknowledged
as an illogical and irrational view which indicates a set of misplaced
values that run the risk of driving the well-being society to a dead end.
  In brief, I would cast doubt on this claim. Furthermore, it is essential
for us to have circumspection before any critical decision-making.
. From 1point 3acres bbs
最后，祝大家杀G成功

必须来感谢楼主一下，我改了改楼主的模版加了点自己的东西，11.15考的W27
刚考完我还有点虚，全文60%+都是模版，说理举例部分少的可怜，这能行么？结果看来ETS确实是喜欢高级词汇+凑字数的套路

“X has won over the widest range of acknowledgement, the significance is
Supposed to be attached to
X. ”

实在想不出来后半句是个什么意思和放在这是个啥作用，求有人解释一下嘛~不胜感激！

嗯嗯~~~先抱走啦~回头自己改改~~~

谢谢楼主。。不过T的模板为什么是祝大家杀G成功。。。3.0的AW含泪飘过

表示不知为何两次考都是 综合写作fair 独立写作 good 最后都是23。。。
含泪飘过。。。

三次托福W26-25-22...哭死

马上就要考了，感谢楼主启发我，明天弄一个自己的模版嘻嘻

cannydie 发表于 2014-11-26 22:57
必须来感谢楼主一下，我改了改楼主的模版加了点自己的东西，11.15考的W27
刚考完我还有点虚，全文60%+都是 ...

真的这样完全套都可以吗

cannydie 发表于 2014-11-26 22:57
必须来感谢楼主一下，我改了改楼主的模版加了点自己的东西，11.15考的W27
刚考完我还有点虚，全文60%+都是 ...

完全套这个都没有问题吗？