1.Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and why
A I would like to go… I often go to…France because I met a friend of mine two years ago she invited me already several times they have been there already several times for several times.1point3acres
过去
I always have been fascinated by French history and I started reading French books, well ,though in Russian but not in French since I was twelve 曾经
I have already been in the south so right now I am going to the north of the country现在
And I would like to try their famous yogurt, cheese, wine just these 将来
评语:High level :
(1)continues speaking ;一直在说;
(2)a variety of vocabulary; a wide range of grammar词汇丰富,用了很多语法;
(3)reasons are well developed; specific details 观点发展的很好;有特定的细节,elaborate by talking about friends, interest in French history and culture and food.
(4) logical progression that make it easy to understand逻辑进展顺利,容易理解。
B I used to go to the 。。shopping mall. Because I like shopping very much, the shopping is one of my hobby. When sth bothers me, I usually go to the shopping center, and realize my mind. If looking around the clothes and shoes and sth else, I feel better than before..though I usually go to shopping , E..and..I usually go to there because of the shopping.
评语:Mid level
(1)is sustained; generally understandable. At times, pronunciation makes it difficult to understand the meaning.
回答被支撑,大体上可以理解。但有时,发音让意思难以理解。
(2)gives only one reason; is used repetitively without much elaboration.
她只给出了一个理由,这个理由被不断重复,没有详细阐述.
(3)could add complexity by saying “When I go shopping, I usually go with friend and we have a good time together without thinking about jobs, or schoolwork”,
可以让观点更复杂
(4)make some basic grammatical errors ;limited range of vocabulary
有一些基本的语法错误;用词局限
2.Choose to take courses in a variety of subject or focus on a single subject
A This is kind of complicated question um I think it’s important to know which stage you are
If you are an undergraduate student, I would rather to take wide range and wide variety of subjects and different areas because it would expand my knowledge, would improve my understanding for different topics,
On the other hand, if I’m a graduate student, I would rather to take specific courses, because if you know, when you are graduate student, you are working and dealing with specific topics and therefore you have to …
评语:(1)thoughtful, sustained answer with ideas and reasons progress logically
有思想、被支持的,理由有逻辑的被陈列
(2)speaks fluently ; good control of grammer and vocabulary, minor error that do not obscure the meaning.
流利;语法、词汇好;错误不影响意思
(3)clearly states his opinion that answer depends on who you are ;give detailed reason to support each
表述清楚,每个观点有支持细节。
B I think it’s better to focus on a single subject area so I can have a deeper understanding of that area so I can be a profession of that topic or whatever the course I am taking
For me it’s easier to concentrate on one thing and most people will be easier if they concentrate on one thing
It depends.. I will prefer for Study on the focusts or single obje. Or subject so that …
评语:Low level
(1)pronunciation is clear, pace is slow and irregular
尽管发音清晰,速度慢且不规则
(2)clearest part are from question. Limited vocabulary;repeat the idea
清晰的部分来自题目,词汇有限,不断重复
(3)thoughts are understandable in sentence, but few connections between. Link would help understand what is being said or predict what will come next
句子里意思清楚,但无连接。连接能让听者理解并知道接下来是什么
3. Bus Service Elimination
What the man here saying is that he wants to keep the bus service for the better being of all the students of campus (总观点)
because there are many students cannot afford a car therefore they use free bus service even though (总原因)
The problem of the bus service right now is that the bus is going through wrong neighborhood that’s too expensive for students to live (对应理由1)
So what they should is just to change the course of the bus and that will take care of the problem (观点解决方案)
Also they should encourage more students to use the bus instead of discourage them (观点与解决方案)
Or they use the money they use for the bus service to increase the space of the parking lots for students,which will add to the noise of the campus ,and will be more congested for all the people who already parking over there (对应理由2)
积累短语: that’ll just add to the noise around campus and create more traffic.
评语:(High)
(1)clear,coherent, detailed , accurate
清晰、连贯、有细节、准确
(2)quickly, but does not prevent from being understood 很快,但不妨碍理解
(3)clearly state the man’s opinion and summarize his reasons 准确描述观点并总结理由
(4)complex structures and a wide variety of appropriate vocabulary 复杂语法,词汇准确
(5)flow automatically
Notes:
(1)不说strongly disagree,直接说他想怎么样+现在的问题什么
The man think the university decision is wrong
According to his opinion, the bus shouldn’t be eliminated.
It create a lot of trouble ..
Due to the existing bus route many students can’t ·#·#¥%the bus
And the overcrowded parking lots are added problem which is also due to the…not..iden…the university bus
If the students haven’t a car and if they cannot afford cannot afford the bus !@$#$% Obviously overcrowded the parking lot
评语:Mid-level:
(1)first language influence her pronunciation, intonation and pacing. This create some listener effort.
口音影响理解
(2)provide content relevant to task, but not accurately convey relevant details
说了相关信息,但不准确
(3)fill entire time with understandable speech, but incorrectly repeat that students cannot afford to ride the bus never mention noise and traffic problems.
勉强听得懂,但重复一个观点,为提到一个重要观点的细节。
4.Audience Effect
In this lecture, the professor give two examples toillustrate the principles of audience effects.
One of them is tying shoes. So in the experiment where two groups …to tie their shoes, The first group were said they were be observed, The other one was not told so. The first group that they knew they would be observed tied their shoes faster; and the other one slower. (运用省略)
In the second example; activities such as typing; again when people are conscious they are being observed they type faster. However, they tend to make more mistakes as well.
So the suggestion is to practice new activities alone in order to reduce mistakes
评语:High-Level
(1)speaks clearly 说的清楚
(2)organize response in a logical way that leads the listener from one sentence to the next。Smoothly transition from one idea to the next
组织有逻辑,一句一句间很顺畅
(3)support response with accurate details and grammatical structures and vocabulary
观点有细节
(4)accurate summarize the examples from listening 准确概括了例子
Oh ting shoes or learning new activity such as typing, trying to learn typing, type, how to type on a computer
The audience definitely have effects on you for example if you know that somebody is watching you. Then you will type faster or you will tie your shoes faster but at the same time you will make more mistakes.
However, if you are not aware that somebody is watching you , looking you, then you may learn slowlier, but therefore, you can type slowlier, or but on the other hand, you can decrease the number of errors on your typing.
So the research suggest that…you can you should do
(主要失误: 没有按照听力部分顺序来组织回答)
评语:Mid-Level
(1)stumble when trying to form basic word(slowlier),which shows a moderate control of grammar and vocabulary.
5.
The problem is the woman got a chance to go to a field trip but on the day for the field trip, she needs to do a museum setup for another professor, so she is not available on that day.
The solutions are,first one: she could find another helper for the professor to do the setup,
The second solution is she could do the setup before Wednesday when the field started. Just do it before she go to the field.
So these two solutions are available for her and I suggest her to do the setup, to finish the setup before Wednesday when
评语:High-LEVEL
(1)connecting words to mark the progression of ideas. Organize her response, so it is easy tofollow her ideas from one to the next.连接词让进展顺利
(2)effeciently summarize the situation 准确概括
The problem the woman has is that the professor let her to take a three days trip during the spring break but she has something to do to help another professor work in the museum. So she would very like to go to the trip but she can’t.
Two solutions is that one is to make somebody to replace(没有替换) her to find somebody replace her.
The other solution is that he should try to finish all of the things she has to do before Wednesday because the trip stat at Wednesday.
So I think the best way is to finish try to done…
评语:Mid-LEVEL
(1)generally understandable, sustains speech throughout the time. 可以理解,一直在说
The sense of hesitation requires listener effort. 停顿让人难以理解
The choppy make it hard to know when one sentence or idea ends and when others begin 停顿让人不知道哪里是观点的终点,哪里开始有新观点
(2)a number of errors with simple grammatical structures (very like to, let her to take, make sb to replace her) 很多基本语法错误
(3)A high level vocabulary would been helpful to efficient summarize
高级词汇能更好概括情况(要换词)
6.
The professor said that the money is the medium of exchange
But anything you can purchase something with is considered to be money. That’s one definition. that means when you achieve …taxi driver who accept money for his ride,
But if he drives a fruit-selling person, he can also, instead of money, accept fruit for his drive. In that case the fruit is the medium of exchange, not the money. So under the first definition,
Dollar bills and Coins are money, but also other medium of exchange, in this case for this taxi driver,
The second definition is a legal definition. The legal definition just coins and dollar bills are legal money in this definition.
评语:High-LEVEL
(1)pronunciation and intonation are highly intelligible. 听的很清楚
(2)words and ideas flow easily from one to next 听上句知道下句是什么
(3)complex grammatical structures and vocabulary 复杂语法及词汇
(4)fluently summarize , response is detailed and sustained 流畅概括,细节详细
One of the definition about money presented by the professor is . 1point3acres
Money is anything that can exchange with purchase
For example, include the coin, the bill, the food and vegetable like this
We can exchange something to buy by purchase,
The first definition is anything we can do with purchase
Another definition about money presented by the professor is the legal …
(例子没有呈现; 没有完全展开; 对词汇运用不熟练)
评语:Mid-LEVEL
(1)pronunciation is generally clear 发音基本清晰
(2)hesitance and choppiness indicate lack vocabulary and grammar 停顿表明词汇语法不丰富
(3)response is incomplete, he struggle to find the right words to convey ideas, time –limit Neither example is included。Most ideas are undeveloped 回答不完整
作文
考试前两天遇到一个119分的牛人,他说托福很简单,他准备了一天半就上了。不过人家已经在美帝待了两年。可能还是跟语言环境有关吧。.--
他说,你要是时间够就往死里写,能写多少写多少。于是我还是用了G作文的资料,独立作文考试的时候写了500+,后面几段没时间检查了,应该有不少错。但有28。
所以在保证了逻辑清楚和一定词汇的基础上,写得多还是有惊喜的。.