【非典型PS问题】想问一下“升华了我的认识”用英语怎么表达？？

这是我看到的一些Tips:
In addition to superfluous content, you also have to watch out for wordy writing. Wordiness not only takes up valuable space, but it also can confuse the important ideas you're trying to convey. Short sentences are more forceful because they are direct and to the point.

Before: "My recognition of the fact that the project was finally over was a deeply satisfying
moment that will forever linger in my memory."

After: "Completing the project at last gave me an enduring sense of fulfillment."

Certain phrases such as "the fact that" are usually unnecessary. Notice how the revised
version focuses on active verbs rather than forms of "to be" and adverbs and adjectives.


Big Words
Using longer, fancier words does not make you sound more intelligent, since anyone can
consult a thesaurus. Simpler language is almost always preferable, as it demonstrates your
ability to think and express yourself clearly.

Before: "Although I did a plethora of activities in college, my assiduous efforts enabled me to succeed."

After: "Although I juggled many activities in college, I succeeded through persistent work."

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    恩 Simpler language is almost always preferable