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题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
正文：
The question of sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support in a college or a university is the one that concerned many faculties at present. It's held by people that both of them are of great significance and we should treat them equally. Meanwhile, there is another issue held by other people that classes and libraries should receive more financial support.  As far as I am concerned, standard of teaching and the atmosphere of learning play the No.1 role in universities and colleges. So, classes and libraries should get more financial supports.

At the beginning, teaching abilities of teachers and the number of books stored in the universities libraries represent the level of a university. In other words, the quality of the classes represents the quality of teaching in universities and the scale of libraries influence the atmosphere in the colleges greatly. For instance, the U.S news made a ranking of U.S universities and colleges. And they rank universities on the basis of the professor’s abilities including reaching abilities and the teaching abilities and the quality and quantities of book in university libraries.

Additionally, classes and books are two unique way of students to approach to their major. The purpose of the most of students go into universities and colleges are finding a good job or pursue a PhD in a particular field which means they must learn knowledge of their major by means of classes and books. For example, I studied electrical and electronic engineering in universities so I should learn some courses like quantum mechanics which are hard for me to understood and I must sign up for some courses and reading some books in addition.

I couldn't deny that sports and social activities made our campus life vividly. Sports not only can make our body healthier but develop our team work abilities as well. Social activities also benefit students greatly. It can broaden student's circle of friends and improve them communication skills. However, from my point of view, learning knowledge related with them major from classes and books is more important.

All in all, in my opinion, classes and libraries should get more financial support for two reason. Firstly, it is a represent the level of a university. Secondly, they are two way of students approach their major.
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