独立写作--336字--still good friend if one is richer

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Two people can still become good friends if one of them has more money than the other one does.

I generally agree that when one of tow people become richer than the other, their friendship can still keep stable only if the friend ship between them is true, which means they open their hearts to each other.

     Admittedly, money can be a factor affecting the frendship. However, this is only correct to those who are not the real friends. There are too many facts that when one make a fortune, in order to keep his money, he becomes ruthless to his friends, even relatives. I will take a famous general named Chen as the example. Chen and his friends were once all poor servants in Qin Dynasty. Then Chen rebelled and become a general, his friends went to ask him for position and money only to be killed by Chen. Since money and status can distort our personality, it is not odd to see Chen treated his friends so cruely.

     Nevertheless, this does not necessarily mean money can always damage friendship. In fact, pure friendship should never be challenged by money. If one is mich richer than his frends, his friends of course will have pressure and others may rumor that those who are so-called friend of the rich just want to utilize him. But true friends will know clearly what each other is and why they are friends.

     Moreover, there are many other things of greater importance than money, such as interest, talents, characters and so on, which really contribute to the establish the pure friendship between two people.Two become friends often since they have common to share, such as the same goal, the same style of songs, which can hardy be changed by money. Even if one gets a lot of money, but he still dreams to do something which his friends also want to, why should they break up their frendship?

     To sum up, according to what has been argued above, we can fairly draw the conclusion that pure friendship is so tough that it can never be influenced by sudden fortune.

希望各位大牛多给些相关的例子，谢谢！

先改语法错误吧。。第三人称加s什么的。。

额，确实是。。。。。。。

哎，觉得逻辑有些混乱呀，你同意还是不同意呢？

你认为：
1.只有真正的友谊才不会收金钱的影响；
2.金钱可能会影响友谊，你举了Chen的例子
3. 但是钱不总是会破坏友谊
4. 其他很多因素影响友谊
5. 总结，友谊不会被突如其来的财富影响

看看你的逻辑顺不顺？

我今天也刚刚写了这篇作文。注意检查拼写哦

确实有点拧，多谢！