TPO16，综合写作求改啊。12号就考试了~~~~~~~

In the lecture, the professor indicates that the situation of science of archaeology in the United Kingdom actually gets some promotion, which contradicts what states in the reading passage that the science of archaeology in the United Kingdom faces some serious problems and limitations.
        Firstly, the sites of the construction projects will be examined before construction. In the lecture, the speakers points out that any sites which will be put into construction should be examined by archaeologists to decide whether it has archaeological interests. If the sites has been confirmed that it has archaeological values, it will get preservations from construction companies and government. In contrast, the reading passage indicates that many valuable artifacts are lost to construction projects due to poor protection.
        Secondly, archaeology nowadays in the United Kingdom has a new source of financial support. The speaker states that any sites with some archaeological values will get preservations, and the costs of the examining, which we discussed in the second paragraph, and the costs of preservations should be paid by the construction companies. This contradicting what points out in the reading passage that financial support for archaeological research is inadequate from the government.
        Thirdly, there are more jobs for archaeologists nowadays. The  speaker indicates that all stages of archaeological researches provide some jobs for archaeologists, such as jobs of examining the construction sites, drawing preservable strategies, writing archaeological reports. The number of jobs provided for archaeologists is actually the highest. However, in the reading passage, it states archaeologists have difficulties in having a career in archaeology.
        To sum up, the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the speaker and the speaker has totally different ideas on the topics in the reading passage.

题目我就不发了。tpo16
之前考过2次，综合都是fair，应该也不是听力问题。
现在套了下网上的模板，求大神指导下。
没两天就考试了~~~~~~~~

综合写作没什么好改的吧...关键把听到的点能尽可能多的写下来就行了，考前都没练过（2次都是good）。
这个模板套的看着有点生硬，虽然似乎应该是没有毛病的。每一段都是把听到的内容写一遍，然后并列的，中立的，简略写一点阅读中的内容。
想象一下，写综合写作就要像你自己就是这个speaker或者是这个speaker的信徒，然后对着另一个所谓砖家的歪理邪说用自己的观点（听到的内容）不留情面的逐一反驳掉这样的节奏，噼里啪啦的说第一点其实是这样的，而不是所谓的那样的（后半句不写都行），第二点呢...
这是我个人感受哈，不喜欢套模板所以没试验过模板得分效果怎样。

mymiracle 发表于 2013-10-9 16:19
. check 1point3acres for more.综合写作没什么好改的吧...关键把听到的点能尽可能多的写下来就行了，考前都没练过（2次都是good）。
这个 ...

这还真是郁闷。我两次作文都是24，第一次没用模板，第二次参考的是OG的范文，结果都是fair。。。。