从TPO70出发，手把手教你如何克服写作壁垒！

ETS最近又有新题发布，转眼间TPO已经从1-70了。作为托福命题机构ETS出品的考试题目，它在考生心中的地位更是不容小觑的。
拥有它，你就能了解到托福的命题思路和方向，就像期末考试老师在划重点，为了更高效的备考，绝对不能错过！

而对于一些学生而言，写作一直是托福成绩的卡分项，下面我就从TPO70的高分范文出发，手把手教你如何克服写作壁垒。

托福写作的评分标准

在开始正式的托福写作备考前，考生首要搞清楚托福写作部分的官方评分标准，主要可以分为以下这3个部分：

文章的组织：指的是我们选定的立场、给出的理由、及理由的排列要有统一性、渐进性、和连贯性。

统一性指的是给出的理由和选定的立场必须统一，不能跑题；渐进性，是指各个理由之间有一定的递进性，不能重复一个理由；连贯性要求文章的各个段落之间、句子之间都要有合理的过渡和衔接，给读者一种一气呵成的感觉。

文章的论证：指的是分论点的展开。ETS官方对此给出两个要求，一个是逻辑，一个是具体。逻辑是指所有的分论点都要围绕着一条主线，具体是指各个分论点要表现出细节。

文章的语言：要求分为两个层次：准确、多样。首先要争取做到单词、短语、句式等都是正确的，避免拼写和语法的错误，并且在善用单词的同义替换。
综合写作范文

First,the author says deforestation would be reduced due to smaller plantation area required by the high-oil-yield palm trees. On the contrary , although the speaker does agree that palm trees do require less land , the world-wide demand of palm oil in food and cosmetics causes farmers to increase the rate of deforestation.



Secondly , the author mentions another benefit that they could be produced to be bio-diesel , an eco-friendly substitute for the fossil fuel . Nevertheless , the speaker does agree with the cleanness of bio-diesel ,but he says the process of planting more palm trees would lead to more carbon emission because they need to burn vegetation before the planting.


Thirdly , one more benefit , according to the speaker, is that the palm trees plantation helps farmers to reduce the poverty among the small-scale farmers and a large proportion of land is in their control. In comparison , the speaker points out that farmers cleared the land but are not in control of the land because the large companies take it over and farmers have little profit .

开头段，只需要写2句话。

第1句话说明阅读部分的总论点，也就是阅读第1段的最后1句。语言能力强的同学可以进行同义改写，而语言能力一般的同学照抄此句即可。

第2句话表明听力和阅读的关系，具体是反驳/解决问题，可以参考题目的Question进行判断。

中间句段，分论点一一进行论述。

一般而言，阅读中的分论断为首句、尾句或者中心句，TPO70中的分论点出现在阅读文章的首句。

需要注意的是，在写分论点时，不仅仅要表现出阅读文章的主要观点，还要注意阅读与听力文本之间的关系。

听力的观点是文章中最容易丢分的环节，在听的过程中要去做笔记，梳理出听力文本中的逻辑链条。

独立写作范文

题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Moving to a new country is exciting, terrifying, enchanting, worrying, amazing…in fact probably all those emotions rolled together, and many more. But once the initial emotional roller-coaster has leveled out, the majority of expats would probably agree that the overall experience of living overseas is overwhelmingly positive. That’s because there are so many benefits of moving overseas and becoming an expat – not just the change in the weather but deep-down benefits that can affect a person’s whole being.


New country experience means learning to speak and read a new language ,which is a huge challenge for most people, but in doing so people will challenge long-hidden skills and brain functions, so much so that scientists do believe that it can lead to increased brain activity and growth and improved health. What’s more, when they move to a new country they can’t help but meet new people – each day they’ll have the chance to put themselves in new and challenging situations. Stepping outside of their comfort zones will keep them mentally agile and younger, thereby slowing down the ageing process.


It's not just long distance relationships that are difficult; managing to maintain a long distance friendship can be equally problematical. Life often takes us in different directions from our closest friends, which often results in us living a long way apart. But there are lots of ways to keep the friendship flourishing.

It's easy to keep in phone contact these days, with many companies offering cheap overseas calls. An unexpected call will really cheer faraway friends up - especially on their birthdays. Besides,Video chats are a wonderful way for keeping in touch with long-distance friends. It's not quite the same as chatting to them face to face, but seeing them on screen is the next best thing to meeting up in person. In any case , a genuine friendship can be tested by distance and loss of friendship only occur when people stop contacting.

Therefore , the positive sides of moving greatly outweigh the negative sides ,so why not choose to live wherever we want?

解题思路：人们搬到一个新的城市或国家而失去老朋友通常不是一件好事。你是否认同这个观点呢？本题的范文不赞同这个观点的。

在例文中，作者首段阐明，虽然移居海外会有不便利的因素，但是总体来说是好的。

第二段中从语言学习、激发潜能和更多的机会论述移民海外的好处。

第三段作者进一步论述和朋友的关系变质不是因为距离的远近，而是因为生活圈子的不同，这种亲密关系的保持可以通过电话的沟通。

最后一段总结作者的观点表明移居海外总体上是好的。

注：引用部分为TPO高分例文哦~

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