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55) In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
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124、The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals.. ----
"In a controlled laboratory study of liquid hand soaps, a concentrated solution of extra strength UltraClean hand soap produced a 40 percent greater reduction in harmful bacteria than did the liquid hand soaps currently used in our hospitals. During our recent test of regular-strength UltraClean with doctors, nurses, and visitors at our hospital in Worktown, the hospital reported significantly fewer cases of patient infection (a 20 percent reduction) than did any of the other hospitals in our group. Therefore, to prevent serious patient infections, we should supply UltraClean at all hand-washing stations, including those used by visitors, throughout our hospital system."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
LZ的一点备考经验
一战之前LZ只做了红皮书和36套和PP2,OG都没看。还执着在新东方课上讲的一些技巧,但是考试之后发现所谓的阅读只看大概意思快速读和填空找明显反义都不是特别有效,而且新东方讲到的作文用自己的模板实际证明非常糟糕(一战AW3.0)。于是LZ痛定思痛,当天买了Magoosh Verbal部分,在4月27号考TOEFL之前都没开始刷。但在备考托福的过程中做了20多套TPO(不做写作),发现考完托福后看GRE阅读好像容易了不少,大概是量变引起质变了吧。考完托福开始刷Magoosh,基本上一天40到60道题,等价于2-3个section,题目难度略大于实际考试,逻辑非常清楚,偶尔有些题考一些偏词,但是实际考试也是会考偏词的!LZ今天就至少碰到3道题有3000上没有的单词。总之做过Magoosh的填空之后再做PP2真是谈笑风生,LZ二战前已经不记得PP2的绝大部分题目了PP2模考一个V167一个V162。总而言之经验就是不要听所谓的捷径,填空就是好好刷单词+好好做题,明显的同反义需要建立在能理解句意的基础上,阅读不需要看的特别快,尤其是虎平老师提到不要回头看这一点我觉得非常不适合我,我二战之前训练的过程中经常反复看句子,看懂了才往下看。这样的好处是看完文章基本上什么都懂了,做题很快而且很准,如果只是大概扫一眼的话再看题目有时候连答案在哪都找不到。。。作文还没有出分,不过LZ考前仔细看了OG上的官方范文,发现有一个issue 4分的文章只有280字,6分的文章也都是很平实的举了很多例子并且做了具体分析,所以LZ觉得issue还是需要多举一些例子并且能够做一些具体的分析,比方说举了一个例子之后要能再多说一两句话。argument部分OG的范文都有一些共同点就是紧扣instruction,就是题目里需要evidence那么每段的第一句几乎肯定出现evidence,LZ认为这个很重要,另外据说ETS打压模板非常严厉,所以argument尽管思维固定也最好不要用模板,即使模板能把字数撑起来。LZ一战argument用自己写的模板大概写了500字,一样是3.0,argument最好还是每段写一个topic sentence之后就直接做具体的分析,语言可以简单,但是分析一定要够,不能总说空话比如this author fails to establish a convincing case for us to believe that ...,直接说it is possible或者perhaps跟可能性就行了。虽然LZ二战的作文还没出分,但是LZ感觉这样应该是比较对的思路。. 1point3acres.com