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I am fond of being aprofessional practitioner in electrical engineering, especially in field of digital design. I have been concerning on this area since I enrolled inmy university and I was greatly impressed by it. The first glimpse of the fieldof computer engineering is through an open course offered by MIT from iTunesUon electronics. Along with the accumulation of knowledge in this field, I foundmyself particularly engaged in the study of how to “tape out” a delicate designof hardware system, from the bottom layer of abstractions of transistors to thelogical design of structures of Soc and synthesis techniques and methodology. Digitaldesign is exactly what I am looking for.
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With the determination to propel me, I worked hard to take extracourses besides mechanics such as Digital Circuit, Synthesis Design ofIntegrated Circuit and Signals and Systems etc. While taking the courseSynthesis Design of Integrated Circuit, I had difficulty initially inunderstanding the idea of using more buffers to disintegrate logic in order tosolve the problem of clock skew and their application in clock tree. I wroteseveral programs in Verilog, including an asynchronous FIFO memory which led toa perspective in comparison with mechanical systems: a signal is like a tinyball tossed out. If it were to pass an obstacle, it has to reach a certainheight, which corresponds to a signal with certain strength and sharpness,before reaching the obstacle. In the process, using the buffer is like reducingthe sickness of the obstacle (disintegrating logic) and it will restore thesignal behavior. What we need to do is to find the balance between attenuationinfluences and cell placements. This endeavor has provided me with a moredirect understanding of how circuits work and a deeper grasp of the concepts inthe electrical engineering.

I also took an internship inthe Chinese Academy of Railway Sciences and during which I gained a lot ofpractical experience. I was mainly in charge of algorithms implementation usingC++ in Linux. Earlier I had experience of programming in Visual C++, but when Ihad a taste of the Linux platform I immediately transferred myself.  From a Linux perspective the computer is morelike a huge file tree so you can check nearly every corner of it as you wish. Ialso accumulated a set of developing environments during that process. The algorithmI focused on was the Marching Cubes algorithm for visualizing scalar field. Ittook me less than one month to get myself familiar with the basic graphics pipelinein detail. I started my prototype rather early to create a navigating scene,after that I made the core algorithms working after debugged a hidden floatingpoint exception using gdb. That whole experiences enriched my practical abilityand get me to a deeper understanding of how a command is compiled and executed andits implicit relationship to hardware settings.

After attending the class inIC synthesis I come to know the world of VLSI and digital design. It is a morechallenging world than I expected yet more amazing and fascinating. So after Ifinished the course I took an internship with the professor in a project abouthigh performance GPU with limited energy and area consumption on mobiledevices. I spent a couple of days trying to understand the computer pipeline notas a user but as a server. During the process of understanding the basicknowledge of pipeline division and graphic vertex and pixel pipelineoperations, an idea came to my mind: to achieve a better performance, if theclipping process is placed before perspective transformations, those dummy datawould not require hardware resources. Bearing this in mind I searched forpapers in architecture pipeline and later talked to my advisor. I tried a smallmodel on an FPGA board but proved to be not that successful. The result and thefeedback from other resources suggest that though a double depth-test may seemto be removing data, that process itself has extra area and elements cost. Whatis worse, the first depth-test is based upon projection relationship whichmeans it could be unsettled. From that experience I learned the balancingbetween different needs and how a design idea grows into a product.
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 楼主| vito 2012-11-10 13:53:55 | 只看该作者
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话说这个字体是怎么回事..........
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zyn334455 2012-11-10 14:39:08 | 只看该作者
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志哥啊 话说好多词没有空格着实看着蛋碎啊~~

我觉得你写的内容还是挺好的。。。个人两点意见,不一定对哈,仅供参考(我最近好久没看英文字了,英语水平退化很快。。有细节没有看明白和看全之类的。。)

1. 我觉得你项目写的太多了。。。我觉得写最多两个比较合适。。。最主要的就是把你的做过的东西的核心思想说出来就好,比如说第三段你说你做了一个核心算法,你可以讲讲你算法的核心思想什么的。类似的还有第二段,比如
a signal is like a tiny ball tossed out. If it were to pass an obstacle, it has to reach a certain height, which corresponds to a signal with certain strength and sharpness,before reaching the obstacle. In the process, using the buffer is like reducing the sickness of the obstacle (disintegrating logic) and it will restore the signal behavior. What we need to do is to find the balance between attenuation influences and cell placements. 可以写明白你是如何find the balance point的,写出大概核心思想就好其实

2. 我觉得段与段之间的逻辑还不是太好,给我感觉是你做过三个项目的罗列。。。你是按啥逻辑写的?

总结一下建议:我觉得项目可以适当删一个。我觉得能把两个项目你做过的核心想法说明白,已经能体现你的能力了。这个是我个人感受。(不过考虑到我英语水平蛋疼的问题。。可能英语是母语的尤其是美国教授们可能觉得你描述了很多项目是你的优势而且他们看着也不会觉得又臭又长。。),所以这条建议你看情况考虑

然后第二个是我觉得你可以多写写你转专业的动机和你为了同修力学和EE的辛苦。。和以后的study plan之类的。。我PS的学习计划就是一个短板,好多学校都提交了才意识到学习计划可以是展示你的知识结构的一个平台。。。不过已经晚了。。。略遗憾.google  и

最后就是把逻辑结构好好改改,然后字数控制一下。(最好在600~800什么的,能控制在一页最好). 1point3acres
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新农人 2012-11-10 17:45:36 | 只看该作者
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zyn334455 发表于 2012-11-10 14:39
志哥啊 话说好多词没有空格着实看着蛋碎啊~~

我觉得你写的内容还是挺好的。。。个人两点意见,不一定对哈 ...

PS里要怎么体现“学习计划”啊?
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pandahotaru 2012-11-10 18:10:45 | 只看该作者
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zyn334455 发表于 2012-11-10 14:39
志哥啊 话说好多词没有空格着实看着蛋碎啊~~. 1point3acres.com

我觉得你写的内容还是挺好的。。。个人两点意见,不一定对哈 ...

和楼上有相同疑问。学习计划是指为了做研究A,准备在今后的一年里学习B、C和D。并且做E的调研?一句话带过?

实际情况是,600-800字=我的两个项目加开头结尾 .1point3acres
学习计划写不下……
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可乐杀手 2012-11-10 18:41:29 | 只看该作者
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同有关于学习计划的疑问
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 楼主| vito 2012-11-10 19:49:03 | 只看该作者
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zyn334455 发表于 2012-11-10 14:39
志哥啊 话说好多词没有空格着实看着蛋碎啊~~
. 1point3acres
我觉得你写的内容还是挺好的。。。个人两点意见,不一定对哈 ...

妞爷感激不尽!!!回头请你吃饭!!!
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zyn334455 2012-11-10 20:20:19 | 只看该作者
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vito 发表于 2012-11-10 19:49
妞爷感激不尽!!!回头请你吃饭!!!

不用~~你看我已经被楼下几位质疑啦

字数的话。。。其实是因为好多学校都有字数限制。。。写少一点你就不用还得再改N版出来。。。

总之我建议你先看看你申的学校的PS的要求,然后根据它要求写我觉得是最好的
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zyn334455 2012-11-10 20:23:51 | 只看该作者
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新农人 发表于 2012-11-10 17:45 .--
PS里要怎么体现“学习计划”啊?

我觉得可以把学习计划和以后的目标合起来说

比如说。。。你要是信号处理的话 你可以提提你想学的技术,比如windowing, filtering, vector quantifications什么的啊。。。然后通过研究生的学习达到一个什么样的目标啊。。。等等吧,具体看网站的要求呗,让写就写,不让写就不写
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yu123 2012-11-10 22:28:54 | 只看该作者
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可乐杀手 发表于 2012-11-10 18:41
同有关于学习计划的疑问

同问学习计划
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