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有小伙伴听力或者写作有问题的话可以直接留言哦
作文需要帮助的话直接把写好的作文打在下面就好啦   有时间我就帮助说说我的想法   毕竟我的作文是  19-28，也大概知道每个提分点在哪
听力有什么问题也可以把痛点写上~  听力我也是18-30的

听力差，21分的水平，能用刷题的办法提高吗？比如每天刷1套并且精听，坚持一个月

Bruce Chu 发表于 2022-12-13 23:46
听力差，21分的水平，能用刷题的办法提高吗？比如每天刷1套并且精听，坚持一个月

您好您好，首先一定得有信心！刷题能提高阅读和听力的！
21分的话我如果没猜错应该是能掌握一些conversation，lecture就很难了
这个时候一定得清晰  lecture是处理一个一个的concept的，所以笔记的痕迹就跟着这个来   
每天刷一套我觉得是不够的，想要一个月提分的话至少要 2h 每天~

你好我听力27/28，但是作文就是上不去，目前最高分24.。。以及我老觉得口语部分的听力比听力部分的还难💧💧想请问有什么建议吗。。。

作文24的话我猜还有一些单词语法的基础错误 以及就是例子讲的不详细或者不扣题
口语的话因为自己也就22 只能妄下结论 口语的听力可能就是笔记记不过来，这个需要一些时间的锻炼~

楼主听力只有19分怎么提高?55555......

今天早上 发表于 2023-1-22 19:32
楼主听力只有19分怎么提高?55555......

应该是对于托福听力还没有适应，建议先对conversation进行突破，精听+泛听是很重要的

作文只有20分，怎么提高呀，目标22，求指点~

培楠 发表于 2023-1-23 23:43
作文只有20分，怎么提高呀，目标22，求指点~

可以pa一部分样例哦
根据我个人的经验20的话一定是有一些极其影响感官的语法错误
再有就是主体段论述不清晰

RNCHEN 发表于 2023-1-24 08:29
可以pa一部分样例哦
根据我个人的经验20的话一定是有一些极其影响感官的语法错误
再有就是主体段论述不 ...

我感觉我的语法意识太差了，楼主有什么快速提高语法意识的好方法吗？我之前考试碰到一个之前考过的原题，结果只考了20，然后第二次用了黎老师的模板（有点生搬硬套orz）结果还是20；下面这篇是我之前练习过的文章，求指点，谢谢！
题目：
A city government wants to improve the education in local high schools (students aged 14-18). The government now has two plans for the teachers training program:
Plan 1. to choose a small group of excellent teachers and let them attend an additional training led by an expert to learn how to teach effectively. Later, these teachers will come back to their schools to train other teachers.
Plan 2. to provide an online training and materials to all teachers and let them use online materials to study individually.
Which plan do you think would be better and why?

回答：
Nowadays, the issue of plans for the teachers training program arouses much controversy. Some people believe that the government should choose plan one because it is a traditional way. However, I prefer plan two and I will give some specific reasons in the following passage.

Admittedly, choosing plan one can let these excellent teachers discuss the best way together in person to train other teachers. However, with the development of technology, all the teachers can discuss the new training method based on the Internet. Computers and smart phone make it convenient for teachers to do this.

First, using online materials to study individually is more efficient than plan one. That is because online training and materials can let all the teachers studying simultaneously. For instance, Mr. Wang is my math teacher, and he needs to take additional training at home because of the covid-19. Our school usually choose plan one to train all the teachers, but this time they have to choose plan two. All the teachers should complete the training program online, and Mr. Wang download a bundle of studying materials from the Internet. He studying all the materials independently in a week without waiting for other teachers to teach him. However, it is surprised that all the teachers complete the training program in a relatively short time, and they cost less time than the normal way. Therefore, plan two is a better way to improve efficiency.

Second, providing an online training and materials to all teachers cost less money than plan one. Choosing plan one means the government need to support these excellent teachers' travelling fee, hotel fee and so on. However, all the teachers studying at home can help the government save these money. For example, Mr. Xi is my English teacher and he is an excellent teacher. Our school used to send him to attend additional training and then let him to train other teachers. Every time they send him to train, the government should give a bonus to him and his teammates. However, since they put all of the materials online and train all the teachers online, there is no need for the government to pay extra money for these excellent teachers. In other words, all the teachers studying at home and it can help the government save a lot of money. To conclude, pan two can help the government save money.

All in all, providing an online training and materials to all teachers and let them use online materials to study individually can help the government save money and time.