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Do you agree or disagree the followingstatement? Nowadays it’s easier to maintain good health than in the past.

The desire to maintain good health hasalways been a serious concern for people throughout human history. Nowadays, anincreasing number of people get problems with their health. Many diseased arefound in people’s life by physical examination in hospital. However, it is myopinion that it is easier to maintain good health today than in the past.

The first reason is that with thehigh-speed development of people’s physical condition, more and more diseaseswhich could not be treated well in the past can be avoided. People do not needto worry about some diseases which are not very horrible at present. Forinstance, in the past, just having a cold could kill a person though he or she oncehad a strong body. Nowadays, when it comes to having a cold, thanks to theantibodies in our immune system, we even do not need to take some medicine.Thus, nowadays, people have healthy bodies so that they can avoid getting some terriblediseases.

The second reason is that thanks to theskillful doctors and some helpful medicine, some disease which were very lethalcan be treated. People do not need to keep in bed and wait for their comingdeath, they just need to buy some modern medicine or drive to the hospital, andthen they will feel much better. For example, my grandfather’s relative got aterrible disease once, he struggled for several years, unfortunately, he ran outhis all deposit to buy some useless medicine, he still had nothing to do butwaiting for death. Several decades later, my friend got into the same trouble,he went to a hospital, took some helpful medicine, got an operation and kept inbed for several weeks. And after that he was totally healthy. Therefore,maintaining good health is easier by the use of modern medicine and operation.

Additionally, people know more about goodhealth today primarily because the modern science and technology discoveredmany things which are magic or mystery before. For example, people did not knowthat it is bacteria and viruses that cause people to get ill until the 1900’s.People now pay more attention to avoid being infected and getting ill.Moreover, people are aware of nutrition and healthy habit.

Finally, people at present have betterliving conditions than in the past. Nowadays, we can use air condition andheater to keep our room temperature stable, so we can avoid getting somehealthy problems which were caused by temperature. While, in the past, a numberof people died because of the high temperature in summers and cold environmentin winters. For instance, in the 1100’s in China, numerous soldiers diedbecause of the hot summer, not the battle. Thus, the much better livingconditions make people maintain good health much easier than before.

From what has been discussed above, we maysafely draw the conclusion that because of the development of science andtechnology, people’s physical conditions and the better living condition, it iseasier to maintain good health today than in the past.

Do you agree or disagree the following statement? Nowadays it’s easier to maintain good health than in the past.


The desire for how to maintain good health has always been a serious concern for people throughout human history.Nowadays, an increasing number of people are getting problems with their health and many diseases were found when taking physical examination in hospital. Evenso, for my part, it is easier to maintain good health nowadays than before.

First and foremost, with the enhancement of people’s physical condition, more and more diseases which could not be treated well in the past can be avoided. People do not need to worry about some diseases which are not very horrible at present. Which can release the fear of diseases for patients and would be beneficial for the treatment and finally helps the patients to recovery. For instance, in the past, even a coldcould kill a person though he or she once had a strong body, which was unimaginable now days. Nowadays, when it comes to having a cold, thanks to the antibodies in our immune system, we even do not need to take some medicine. Thus, people today have stronger bodies so that they can avoid getting some terrible diseases.

Furthermore, thanks to the skillful doctors and some helpful medicine, some disease which were very lethal can be treated. People do not need to keep in bed and wait for their coming death. With the help ofdoctor, taking the medicine timely as advised and having enough rest, most diseases can be cured now days. For example, my grandfather’s relative got a terrible disease once, he struggled for several years, ran out his all deposit only to find he still had nothing to do but waiting for death. Several decades later, one of my friend got into the same trouble, he went to the hospital, took some helpful medicine, got an operation and kept in bed for several weeks, and later he was totally recovered. Therefore, maintaining good health is easier by the use of modern medicine andoperation.

Additionally, people know more about goodhealth today primarily because due to the fact that the modern scienceand technology discovered many things which are magic or mystery mysteriousbefore. For example, people did not know that it is bacteria and virusesthat cause people to get ill until the 1900’s. People now pay more attention toavoid being infected and getting ill. Moreover, people are aware ofpaymore attention to nutrition and healthy habit.

Finally, people at present have better living conditions than in the past. Nowadays, we can use air condition andheater to keep our room comfortable, avoiding getting some healthy problems which were caused by temperature. For instance, inthe 1100’s in China (prepositions rigth?), numerous soldiers died because of the hot summer, not the battle. Thus, the much better living conditions makepeople maintain good health much easier than before.

From what has been discussed above, we maysafely draw the conclusion that because of the development of science and technology,people’s physical conditions and the better living condition, it is easier tomaintain good health today than in the past.


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另外，论坛的排版经常把空格去掉，词都连在一块了，每次排版都要花好长时间……
hdchina2010
2013-08-11

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hdchina2010 发表于 2013-8-11 13:34
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