谁的建议更有用：年长者v.s.同龄人

前段时间发现地里有个好东西啊，就是可以互改作文~~~ 然后特勤劳的perlin版主还会很快改完回复~~~

一直想写一篇作文发上来大家看看挑挑毛病来着。。。可一直拖到今天才动笔。。。

anyway, 不废话了，下面是我的作文，竹子机经11月的第2篇，麻烦各位亲看看，给挑挑错，提提建议神马的~~~

Topic: getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends in your same age.

People always tend to find friends for advice when they have problems. But which one to turn to is variable. Someone think advices from friends at the same age are much more valuable, while others prefer someone older than them. However, in my view, whose advice is more helpful depends on the problem itself.

Most people ask for advice from their peers because friends at the same age can be more empathetic. It is true that they may have been through the same trouble so that they would have full understanding of your situation, but constructive suggestions cannot be achieved in this way. Only those friends who are older than you, who have been survived from what you are suffering now can give you empirical advice and help you out of your trouble, which you can see clearly from the following example of graduates. Nowadays, graduates have a hard time in finding a good job. Around them are groups of young people who are frustrated by the same problem. Except for encouragement from each other, or sometimes even worse, tons of complains, they cannot get anything useful after talking with their fellow sufferers. Yet, if they consulted with those who have entered the job market one step earlier and have successfully possessed a prospective job, things would be totally different. From how to set up career plans to how to prepare for an interview to how to revise resume, order friends can offer them exactly what they need.

So peers' suggestions cannot work all the time. Even though it may be easier to communicate with them, older friends are much more helpful, especially when it refers to suggestions. Not only successful experience but also painful lessons can we learn from them. We will know what should and should not do, where are the shortcuts, how to take a detour, etc. by discussing with our relatively knowledgeable friends. Still, older friends are not panacea. Friends at the same age can also be very helpful under certain circumstances. For example, your peer friend happens to be an expert in the aspect you have question, let's say your friend is a photographer and you cannot decide which camera to choose. Why bother your other older friends rather than asking this one directly?

Whose advice is more helpful differs from situation to situation, and sometimes differs from friends, too. Next time when a problem comes, just think a minute, and then decide which friend would give you the most valuable suggestion. Go and find him/her! Otherwise, you would waste both your and your friends' time or sometimes you just make things even worse.

没人帮我改作文呐 好桑心

T第2篇作文就是往长里写，基本的5段式，500字差不多就能拿good了...

starsrest 发表于 2013-10-31 19:55
T第2篇作文就是往长里写，基本的5段式，500字差不多就能拿good了...

额 原来考了两次T 每次都只能写300多一点点
这也是考前练习才能写个400+
要写500+ 这让我如何是好啊。。。
每次都感觉没话说，写篇作文甚是艰难啊。。。

毛小小猫 发表于 2013-10-31 19:58
额 原来考了两次T 每次都只能写300多一点点
这也是考前练习才能写个400+
要写500+ 这让我如何是好啊。。 ...

我是按照高频练的 平时也是写3，400的样子。不过很多人的经验都说500字就是good了，然后那次我正好碰到一个我比较擅长的题材于是就写了500+...然后就good了...

毛小小猫 发表于 2013-10-31 19:58
额 原来考了两次T 每次都只能写300多一点点
这也是考前练习才能写个400+
要写500+ 这让我如何是好啊。。 ...

有时候就偷懒，就直接抄范文，模范标准句子....练熟了就好了

starsrest 发表于 2013-10-31 20:20
有时候就偷懒，就直接抄范文，模范标准句子....练熟了就好了

恩恩 那我再多练练~~~