请问各位大牛硕士的陶瓷信叫兽会回复咩…

如题～学弱想问一下，土木这方面硕士陶瓷有用吗？我套的UTA，周五发的邮件，发了五个叫兽并没有回复…请问各位大牛我是该继续狂轰滥炸还是坐等？谢谢啦

Thank you for your interest in doing research with me. I believe your research interests do align with mine. At this moment, I do not have funding available to support a new graduate student. If you were interested, I do have some students doing research on self-centering structures, and it might be possible to join this team of researchers; however, this would be unfunded research.

附上陶瓷信一封请大牛帮助修改 第一次写毫无经验
Dear Professor

I am a undergraduate student from Harbin Institute of Technology, China, and I have applied the CEE department in UT Austin. In fact, I have great interest in self-centering structures and the earthquake engineering. When I was a junior, I ever helped Adam Muller, who is a graduate student from Western Michigan University to fulfill his project about seismic research, which contains hybrid simulation and utilization of OpenSees.  About the self-centering structure, I ever read some papers to prepare for my undergraduate project, such as Cyclic Testing and Assessment of Shape Memory Alloy Re-centering Systems written by  Matthew S. Speicher, and Damage-Free Seismic-Resistant Self-Centering Concentrically-Braced Frames written by David Alan Roke.

However, because of the limited time, I have now chosen Incremental Damage Analysis Based on Mainshock-Aftershock Sequence- type Ground Motions as my research title. I will use real mainshock-aftershock sequence from PEER, and make a SDOF model with different hysteretic models, to analyse the incremental damage. This kind of method is so-called back-to-back methods. I am very glad to get your brilliant advice for this research.

In the future, if possible, after my graduate study, I would like to pursue my doctorate study also in the area of earthquake engineering, and developing more seismic-proof structures such as the self-centering structure. As you know, China is a country with a lot of catastrophic earthquakes, especially in Sichuan, Tangshan, and many other places. That is why I want to join your  research team, and really do something for the structural safety, people's lives and their happiness.

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,
Harbin Institute of Technology.

我感脚。。如果不牛的话 套磁木有必要。。 0.0

套磁一点没有突出你的亮点~写研究，先写做过什么东西，学到什么了什么技能，得到什么人生感悟~为什么选择UTA,为什么选择这个老师~附上简历~给个理由让教授要你~加油，学弟~还有那个结尾签名，你代表HIT全体同仁去套这个教授了【或者你是担心这里是公共场合，自动隐去了姓名，建议看看英文签名怎么写】~最后一段建议删掉

“In the future, if possible, after my graduate study, I would like to pursue my doctorate study also in the area of earthquake engineering, and developing more seismic-proof structures such as the self-centering structure. As you know, China is a country with a lot of catastrophic earthquakes, especially in Sichuan, Tangshan, and many other places. That is why I want to join your  research team, and really do something for the structural safety, people's lives and their happiness.”这个删掉，没有突出你的特点

sugar_amanda 发表于 2014-3-1 13:50
我感脚。。如果不牛的话 套磁木有必要。。 0.0

不敢苟同。。

flyUSA 发表于 2014-3-1 14:06
“In the future, if possible, after my graduate study, I would like to pursue my doctorate study als ...

学姐威武～我把叫兽和我名字都弄掉了～

建议你别这么发。。。读完没什么正作用的感觉

1.太长，最多150个词，其实100个就够了。教授没空看这么长的东西。
2.写出自己的三维，说明自己符合录取标。
3.一个学校同一个department不要一次狂轰乱炸，一个一个来发，一个老师等起码一周
4.要有针对性，每个老师做的研究都是有分别的
5.根据我自己的数据，9月份套磁，70%，10月份，60%，11月份，20%，12月份，5%。越早越好，现在套，看运气吧

alked 发表于 2014-3-1 17:36
1.太长，最多150个词，其实100个就够了。教授没空看这么长的东西。
2.写出自己的三维，说明自己符合录取标 ...

其实我把自己简历附件上了...已经狂轰滥炸过了现在就等吧。。。我是申请硕士估计老师只会说thanks for ur interest 之类的...早知道就提前来网上问一下了